This sucks what I'm about to say considering the topic of your blog, but I'm hoping you can take this as constructive advice and nothing negative. This does not promote quality content..

Putting aside that English is not your first language, we can get over that, but I think you wrote the blog in one go with no proof reading or anything :/

Try using SteemPeak.com you can save drafts there so you don't have to publish your post until it is ready for the spotlight 🥂

When you publish something to the public it represents you, you only want to put your best work forward. Since English is not your first language, would be best to make sure that the English you do put out is as readable as possible.

It also would be best to have made two separate posts, one for the personal feelings and one for Splinterlands. Again Steempeak.com would be good for things like this because you can save drafts, schedule posts etc..