Defeat after defeat
Kissing your lips, sweet as lemon
Shivering of wounds’ heat
You used ‘love’ as a weapon
‘I do’ vowed as a threat
But how little did I know
That together “until death”
Was pledged by hell its glow
Attached to satan's servant
Trying to reach for heavens
Seduced by adam's serpent
Isn't that devil's favourite peasant?
Lost in morals
Wordchoice beautifully balanced, nice work
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I liked what you did with the antonyms. Good write.
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Cool.. Upvoted @nazarwills
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Thank you!:)
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Wow you text and images, very nice and good for us. I like this post.
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