I have the impression your article is inspired from the second and third paragraph of this article for this first part, a paragraph of this article for the second part and the first sentence of this article for the last part.

As copy pasting is not really recommended on steemit (this consists of after all plagiarism), may I suggest you to indicate your sources, and quote text taken from elsewhere so that your readers will be able to get what is your own original text and what is not. Another option is to post a link and write one or two paragraphs of your own to explain why you liked this link.

Thanks in advance for your consideration!