The mind is filled with voids that needs filling with moments.
The mind is plain and open with endless boundaries that needs occupying.
The mind is hungry and thirsty with so much pain from these afflictions it needs some food and water to stay alive.
The mind is dirty and deep down inside, it has a rope that leads nowhere but reaches the depths of the abyss and it needs a saint to help it find directions.
The mind struggles to find its place in the events of life as we know of it and mostly gets lost and it needs a guide to direct it right so we don't go lost in the mace.
The mind is blind to what matters a d what doesn't and it really never produces the results the owner sets out to achieve and it needs the help of a leaders to get there.
The mind is heavy and mourns everytime there is pain and it needs someone to encourage it back to not being sad.
The mind is light hearted, happy and joyful when it needs to be but, it always gets the hate coming to help it not find it purpose within the colors.
It's a somber piece- beautiful and well written. If I can make a small suggestion for this sentence:
"happy and joyful when it needs to be but, it always gets the hate coming to help it not find it purpose within the colors."
I think the comma should be moved to this position ""happy and joyful when it needs to be, but it always"
I could be wrong though, which in case, nevermind =)
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