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It was warm whilst it lasted,
Towards the end it was finally rested,
Too heavy it is to have waved,
A final adieu that isn't meant to be saved.
The scar it has left,
It is nothing but a theft,
The flurry of emotions,
To end a former fixation.
The heart has been bleeding love,
A stab wound meant to burn and bite,
But the soul has no respite,
It is a journey that must drown the pride.
It is lingering memories,
That tend to tell stories,
To the raw heart that still hiccups,
From the stumble that no fate could makeup.
Destiny has call a goodbye,
It has been such a ride,
The sun has dawned,
Sunset is only a reminder that night shall fall.
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I was like feeling all melancholic and shit when reading your poem... and then the end is like MAKE ME YOUR WHALE BUY ME A CAR HAHAHAHA
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I m also melancholic. So i relied on the adage a burden shared is a burden lessened. Thx for the shoulder.
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All that stick in my head is the end.. Make me your whale and buy me a car... LOL
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If I'm Sam smith or Adele, I'll make your poem into my next song
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And i collect the royalty?
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And i collect the royalty?
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Of course! Then it can go towards your dream car
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Then get @soonmusic to compose and make it into a song... Then we all got some shares lah... Coz we all contribute into making this happen... If it happens...
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you know, the song kinda works with sam smith's too good with goodbyes, just need a chorus.
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The mesage is well delivered and direct. Nice one
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Thx bro. Appreciated.
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Thx bro apprexiated.
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thanks to @bitrocker2020
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Hello fellow melancholic, you write well! Upvoted :) best thing to do when the heart hurts is to turn it into something beautiful :)
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hi @joanneandjulia...but your upvote wont count, it must be within 7 days from the date of posting to count. So, you owe me a roti canai plus teh tarik. Yeah, poem music and art are beautiful things. the harder it hurts the more connected the piece is...
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