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It was warm whilst it lasted,
Towards the end it was finally rested,
Too heavy it is to have waved,
A final adieu that isn't meant to be saved.

The scar it has left,
It is nothing but a theft,
The flurry of emotions,
To end a former fixation.

The heart has been bleeding love,
A stab wound meant to burn and bite,
But the soul has no respite,
It is a journey that must drown the pride.

It is lingering memories,
That tend to tell stories,
To the raw heart that still hiccups,
From the stumble that no fate could makeup.

Destiny has call a goodbye,
It has been such a ride,
The sun has dawned,
Sunset is only a reminder that night shall fall.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I was like feeling all melancholic and shit when reading your poem... and then the end is like MAKE ME YOUR WHALE BUY ME A CAR HAHAHAHA

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I m also melancholic. So i relied on the adage a burden shared is a burden lessened. Thx for the shoulder.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    All that stick in my head is the end.. Make me your whale and buy me a car... LOL

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        ·  7 years ago 

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          ·  7 years ago 

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              ·  7 years ago 

            If I'm Sam smith or Adele, I'll make your poem into my next song

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                ·  7 years ago 

              And i collect the royalty?

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                ·  7 years ago 

              And i collect the royalty?

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Of course! Then it can go towards your dream car

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Then get @soonmusic to compose and make it into a song... Then we all got some shares lah... Coz we all contribute into making this happen... If it happens...

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    you know, the song kinda works with sam smith's too good with goodbyes, just need a chorus.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      The mesage is well delivered and direct. Nice one

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Thx bro. Appreciated.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Thx bro apprexiated.

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            thanks to @bitrocker2020

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Hello fellow melancholic, you write well! Upvoted :) best thing to do when the heart hurts is to turn it into something beautiful :)

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                hi @joanneandjulia...but your upvote wont count, it must be within 7 days from the date of posting to count. So, you owe me a roti canai plus teh tarik. Yeah, poem music and art are beautiful things. the harder it hurts the more connected the piece is...

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