Why your love fails

in love •  7 years ago 

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Your life fails because you love too much
You stayed till dark by the road side waiting for her to pass with a smile
Holding beautiful fine roses in a wait till the very last one wilters
You plan when and how to say every word
You love too much that you plan every word to say to him
So drowned imagining how sweet her lips will taste that the words slip of your head
You fail cos you're not an expert at playing
Unlike a player, you're a fool
But soon, you'll find another fool who's also failed at love
Together, you'll fall, like acrobats dancing to a sweet rhythm
And that will be the truest of loves.

Dear,
Life is sweeter with surprises.
The best things are never planned.

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Amazing poem, love is not planned though not in all cases, but sometimes you feel like "oh, i hope am not fucking up when am around her, you want to look as gentle and as perfect as you can be, so you seems crazy in love, you blush when you are with her... Lol.......
Love is just unexplainable. And its fun.....especially when its still hot.

Thank you

Is one thing to love someone and is another thing to be loved back

Sincerely thats true, love sometimes can be complicated