You told me to close my eyes
Told me there was something
I had doubts
but eager to please
I shut my eyes
An aroma of excitement
A tension builds
The finite distance between us
only crushing
all is but a vacuum
The air is stiff
noises hush
everything stands still
and I wait
and before I realize
a warmth spreads
from the origin
to my absolute
a sweetness fills my mouth
that was the moment
I knew I had been kissed
and You told me to close my eyes
as there was something
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A nice poem. You seem to have been writing since quite a while now. Hope to see some more brilliant work. Good luck :D
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Thank bro. Motivated reading your work. :)
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Hait! This is very sensual. Paints pictures in your mind.
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Thank you bro.. The chord has been struck... Kachingggg
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The link to my original work at Tricked
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