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in love •  6 years ago 

This is intense and yet charming, @olakunle10. Nice!

I will admit that I'm not exactly sure what is happening in this story. But I love the richness and cadence of this line, in particular:

The voice of storm, rowdy; like a mortar, it was pounding.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Thank you @jayna
    But literarily, the story is depicting that regardless of the intensity of fire and storm, the only danger I fear is the loss of my love, smiles.

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Nice. Thanks for that additional information!

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