When I was in 10th grade, I composed a poem to dedicate to my Mum, and pay the debt for her unconditional Love showered on me. Do let me know your Opinions.
How many days have you cried for me ?
How many tears have you dried for me ?
How many days have you worried long ?
How many years have you filled with song ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER
How many times I have hurt your heart ?
How many times have we been apart ?
How many prayers have you said for me ?
How many miles have you walked for me ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER
How many times will your heart be glad ?
How many times will you say of your laid ?
How many times you have to listen because of me ?
How many times have you been tired of me ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER
How many times have you cooked for me ?
How many times have you sung lorry for me ?
How much time have you spend on me ?
And so that I am giving this life to you β¦
Though the hours are short and minutes are few
You are my life and
You are my death
Who knows β¦..?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER
### Your Loving Son :- Prem Raval
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Let me know in the comments, How is your love for your Mother?
Hi my best friend,
I love my mother too much and i respect any fellow mate who loves and respects his mother.
i have noticed that in the 2 pictures she is wearing the same dress, at which between the 2 pictures at least 7 years as i think.
this is meaning that she is very conservative lady at which this is a good thing in a mother, same like my mother.
I hope and wish your mother full prospective future with her kids and daughters .
I have upvoted this post and 3 comments t7of total value 0.12 as to cover your fees and more gifts from my heart to your love of your mother.
in our region - we have a poet said a very strong poem about the mother, his name is ahemd sahoqi from egypt - middle east , i will translate one line from hispoet as he said :
Ψ§ΩΨ§Ω Ω Ψ―Ψ±Ψ³Ψ© Ψ§Ψ°Ψ§ Ψ§ΨΉΨ―Ψ―ΨͺΩΨ§ Ψ§ΨΉΨ―Ψ―Ψͺ Ψ΄ΨΉΨ¨Ψ§ Ψ·ΩΨ¨ Ψ§ΩΨ§ΨΉΨ±Ψ§Ω
A MOTHER IS A SCHOLL IF SHE IS WELL PREPARED THEN YOU WILL GET A COMPLETE KIND SOFT HEATED AND STRONG POPULATION
MY BEST TO YOUR MOTHER, FATHER AND FAMILY
SAMER
RED-ROSE
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PLEASE SEE OTHER REPLIES IN OLDER POST
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No one can replace mother and that's why says janani ni jode nahi jade re lol, jem gol vina modo kansar tem maa vina suno sansar.
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Oh yes, I have heard of this Phrase, infact I have attended a session about "Maa Vina Suna Sansar" It got me tears down my eyes, when I heard all the real life examples in it.
It's so true.
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hi, thank you for your trust, and i apologize for the delay in the upvoting as one racist member downvoted my service and my reputation down from level 54 to level 40, so i am under huge pressure, i upvote your posts and comments to show you that i am still on my promise to reach 300 to 500 % of your fees as a gift.
I am still on my promise to return your loan but please give me some time, i will fullfill my obligation but i am now in a very bad position as you can see, i get more funds from my savings outside steemit to become stronger, so please give me some time and you will be happy i promise you.
once i see a nice picture from your posts taken by you, i will add it to my comments reply back as above pictures to spread news about your good work
i will keep supporting you, yes i vote with "little" delay but i will fullfil my obligations as really i love steemit tooooooooooooooooooo much
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I confide in you @red-rose
Thanks for supporting.
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Mother knows best.. πππ
Nice poem .. Thank you for sharing with us..
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Thanks @micch for appreciating my efforts.
I have been blessed to get in your good books.
It's more because of my Inspiration from you that I wrote such meaningful poetry.
Stay Connected.
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Wow I'm so flattered bhai, your such a wonderful brother π
keep on making inspirational poetry cause you have that talent!!
Love you too brotherπ
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Wow! Nice poem from a loving son... A mother is irreplaceable ...
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Thanks @tonie.
I am blessed to be her son. I will make sure to make her feel proud by fulfilling her expectations & wishes for me.
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You are lucky you still have her... :)
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@originalworks
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Really,Mom is the greatest person in our life.
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That's undoubtedly true.
Keep in touch for more.
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@steem-untalented
#untalented
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mom's knows best for his child always...in return be good to her always π
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Thanks Charito !!
I will definitely make my best efforts to be good to her & at the same time do everything I could do for her.
Stay Connected @sweetcha
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good luck, good boyπ
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Glad to see people who are giving utmost importance, love and care to their parents especially their mom. Nice poem!
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Well, I feel that it is my moral Responsibility to show my respect & love for her for all her un-repayable debt that I am bonded with.
I acknowledge your Appreciation.
Thanks @long888
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now, Im proud to be a mom!!
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Woah, That's Great.
Do share your Experience of being a Mother.
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Really wonderful and deep words brother. Mothers are gift to the human kind, as a brother i want to advice you that in any situations never leave the hands of your parents, because they need nothing from their children, only separation from the children breaks the heart of parents. Thanks for sharing these deep words.
Have a great day and stay blessed.
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I assure you @chireerocks that I will never leave her nor will I make her feel down for any of my actions.
I have utmost importance for her in my Life.
And it's not just my mother, but all the loving mothers throughout the world, I pay them this tribute for showering their Unconditional love to their families.
Thanks Sir, I appreciate your opinion.
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Welcome and i really want to appreciate you for your words.
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I am Grateful to you Sir.
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Thank you. π
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mom
She is our light
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yes, That's the veracity we live in.
Without her, we are nothing more than darkness.
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All mom is amazing PremβΊ
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Yes, I Agree.
Not just my Mom, but everyone's mother.
Mother, the character in our society is actually the most unconditionally loving being we could ever get connected to.
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Nice post Prem
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Thanks @meechit
Your opinion proves to be a motivational force to write even better.
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Wow sweet mother.mothers love is the best
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Thanks @gimba
I respect your opinion.
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This is very emotional. I dont know you personaly but this poem made me know how deep and expressive you are.
I love it @premraval010
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Aww, I am glad that you loved it.
Keep in touch for more, I would be happy to know you personally.
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GIFT VOTE WITH ROSE
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Mother's prayer is a prayer that gives us success
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This was very beautiful!
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Thanks @catt
I acknowledge your appreciation.
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You got a 28.57% upvote from @votebuster courtesy of @premraval010!
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