My life was once a happy place, No tiff, no tryst had been
But all that one day so suddenly changed, I cannot describing begin
I never had no worries, no thoughts occupied my mind
N now all I had, were dreams of a different kind
Before I saw her face that day, she never existed for me
But now all I think about is us, as if were meant to be
She stood there, so magnificent, a creature I had not seen
Wearing a look of innocence, in those eyes, jade green
I close my eyes n I see her, looking as radiant as day
I open my eyes to her sweet smile, like a thousand lilies in May
My life has become miserable, She’s captured all my dreams
And not even a moment is mine, without her thoughts bugging me
I try to find, does she love me? But the answer is as hard
As a combined problem of calculus, and algebra would be to a retard
I cannot take this anymore, I cannot bear this pain
Oh curses to you oh Cupid for driving me insane
Till this love bug bit me, my life was so first-rate
N now how m I supposed, to ask her for a date?
I do not know what I shall do, I know not what lies ahead
But she is a problem which is boggling my head
I have to do something, n there’s only one thing left to do
That is to go to her n confess: Darling, I love You
An old piece. Do let me know in the comments below if you liked it.
This was an interesting poem, and I liked how it came at love from a different angle. I struggled a bit with the "n"s and it threw off the rhythm for me, but the torment expressed by the narrator was evident throughout. Good write. Keep at it.
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