See I don't really have much to write about no more
I used to write about being mad angry, drug fucked and dirt poor
Used to write like I had an axe to grind, bone to pick, butt hurt - arse soar
But now life's pretty damn good, so how can I write raw?
No experience writing happy, cos I'm not that used to glad
Come a long way from that boy with no dad
That young man on the streets doing tons of bad
Hoping this the new paradigm, not just a passing fad
Cos straight up I don't wanna, can't go back to that ...
And I won't - cos I realised I control my own path
Realised them lads were holding me back, so I moved past
They got mad at that at that, so I moved further - I moved fast
Moved up and I moved out, moved down, yeah I moved south
And yeah living with the folks now, near 30 like a loser
Don't spend much time out and about - just me and the computer
But I had more fun in my teens and 20s than you ever will in the future
And not forced to be here - I choose here, cos shit's super
Watching my little bro grow and grow
Only 13, but he's taller than me now yo
Impart a little knowledge from experience shown
Won't make the same mistakes that I did - hope
Original lyrics
Image from Pixabay
@bulleth that is how I grew UP without a DAD in my life and Angry at the World on Drugs and Drinking and now I am just a nice Old Guy here on STEEMIT.................
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What doesn't kill you!
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Great Lyrics At First of lyrics I was Thinking it's will be about Suicide ^^
I like it (y) following you (y)
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Thanks mate, nope - came close, but never took the plunge and happy to say I never will!
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İ love You :D good job bro :D
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Cheers bro :D
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hahah thanks :D Following :D
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Duuuuude, this is Sick!
Thank you for the story, let me know if you ever want a phat beat produced for it haha
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Thanks dude, this was the first thing I'd written in ages. I spat some of my boy @anotherpoet's stuff the other night in a free/spoken work kind of style and it inspired me to pick up the pen again.
Don't spit no more, but you can check out a couple of my old joints at https://www.soundcloud.com/shyft1
Got a link to yo beats?
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Siiick, not to my random production beats, just to the band, spoken word is the best dude, I like to incorporate that in my music too.
http://dukesofnote.wixsite.com/dukesofnote
Like theatric Rock \m/
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amazing lyric.
love it
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Thanks shaggy :)
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you are welcome...
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Great! I love the frequent use of the word "moved" I can already imagine how it sounds while rapping.
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Yeah I dig word play - a lot more to rapping than just rhyme!
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Great lyrics. Enjoyed that. Thanks!
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No worries, glad you enjoyed!
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Love your lyric, nice
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Thank you for sharing @adsactly , the post worth be reading , i'm interested of this kind of things , personally if you allow my opinion ,my definition of homesteading is like your's and i wish live on farm and do what i love . but for me it seems impossible in the current time (sorry about it) , knowing that i was a homesteader in the past , i had a farm but cuz of my living conditions i can't realy work on it and spent more time ,i explain :
In my country which is "Algeria" , working for a day (let's say 8 hours) gives you just 4$-5$ max,and some jobs are really hard and not enough paid , so i decided to do 2 jobs in one day and sometimes 3 ! ,so i think you agree with me if i say that working day & night will destroy my health ! unfortunately that was the unique way to make some money and build up my farmhome and buy some chickens to start together a beautiful story (:D oolululu my dream lost).
When Finally i achieved some of my desires like Fenced my little garden and make some money after 3 long months ! , it's at this moment when I had some health problems that I wasn't ready for, Two ankle sprains for both my legs! A heart disease,.... and other health problems (I don't have the courage to speack about it so sorry), in short the total, and all the money I had left in medical care .
And that's why I gave up the farm and almost everything. I want to get up but without "money & support from anyone" it is difficult, but at least I do not lose hope for live! I don't give up! , thank you again for sharing this post , trust me that make me feel better & happy .
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Hey mate, I think you might have the wrong post as this wasn't an @adsactly post, but sorry to hear about your troubles ... I just sent you 2 SBD, usually not much, but ~$20 USD atm and sounds like that might help a little ... Merry Christmas!
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Wow this is an awesome work.... I appreciate creative write ups... Good job
You can also check my poems out at my page @johnakharia
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Thanks John, upvoted and resteemed your poem about the horrors of war
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Thanks @bulleth
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That was really nice :o I hope to read more of your work in the future!
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I respect what you're doing and I'm doing the same just wanted you to know.
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I am impressed by your write-up and most importantly your motivation and lyrics too...
You could upvote my introductory post@gptins
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