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You failed to see Revenge in my eyes bro
If you had looked into my eyes, you would see the fire of revenge burning in them. You warned me to store food, but I didn't. You thought I was having fun, but I was after that enemy ant that killed our mom.
I was looking for a chance, so I did not care about my life. I died in the end by starving, but I killed him, and right now I am sitting in our mother's lap. I am glad what I did.
Task 2: Funny Telegram
Yes, I was playing a game, a violent funny game where I took that killer ant hostage in his hole for his life, I won.
Reflection Task 2:
Note: I felt encouraged after I received @Joslud's message on my previous post since I had no intention to post in this contest having no first contest post. I have used Bing AI to create the image. I know I could make this telegram shorter but I lost my keys to Morse code so it became a bit longer.
What was the problem when creating this post the post
I was not sure whether to ask for a fight like they challenge and ask for a fight in Russian style or let the ant enter her enemy's hole and play mind games before killing him.
That killer ant wasn't eager to play but I was in a playful mood and wanted to engage him in a game that only an ant with revenge in her mind can play.
He tried to avoid me in various ways, but I was prepared for all possible interpretations and ideas! I suggested to him all possible games and ideas but he probably knew my intention so he tried his best to avoid me by converting me to other activities.
I was thinking in terms of playing with him in a child’s play but he might have guessed my intention that I was a tough ant and he must have seen the fire of revenge in my eyes. I wanted to deal with him and kill him as a character in an adventure game.
The killer ant tried to rescue himself like a child could be saved from coming danger. He acted like a brave hero but his destiny was calling him.
It was a killer ant vs. a grieved ant and not a playful competition where the grieved ant had the upper hand and finally outsmarted the killer in the end.
He knew from the very beginning it was a game that involved preplanned strategy and his end was certain. He didn't want to play but he should have known the rules of the ant colony, A game where players know their rules and strategize against threats.
He should have known there is no survival and that guilty players must face challenges posed by aggrieved and aggressive ants.
The game I made him play ended his life in the end even if I died hungry in the end. I am glad I am with our mom.
Fire in my eyes
In my gaze, a wildfire ignited,
When I saw him in his hole
that evening A blaze born in my mind,
I tried my best to keep that storm at bay,
But you know when the fury flickers
And dances, it took all my senses away
Each spark reminded me
My aim and what I had to do!
As per the suggestion of the editor:
Summary 1
You failed to see Revenge in my eyes bro
(The emotional depth of Mother's love)
This story depicts a deeply emotional and vengeful feeling of the ant whom everyone thought was having fun. The ant, the main protagonist, who was in deep love with her mother, was after the killer ant for the revenge of her mother's murder.
This story is not all about the feeling of revenge but also reflects the willingness to sacrifice her life for the love of her mother. In this case, a daughter doesn't care about her life but her beloved mom.
The love for her mother and the desire to protect her are the main motivating elements of this story. When she lost her mother, deep grief and anger arose within her. This love motivated her to chase the killer ant to his hole until she killed him.
This story is all about vengeance and love. When we lose our loved ones, our reactions are often extreme.
Summary-3
The fire of revenge
The feeling of revenge emerges in this poem. She kept a fire of revenge burning in her eyes, showing that she wanted to go up to any distance and never forgive her enemy.
This feeling was so strong that she did not care about her life and wanted to keep the fire of revenge burning in her eyes as long as she killed him. She took his enemy to his destiny before reaching her own.
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@joslud and @solperez I will add more comments later.
Task 2:
Task 2: 1,79/2 pts
The telegram is understood in the context of the entire publication and in the reflections. But looking for it to work independently as a micro-story, as a complete story in itself. I think that a title was missing, or using the Sender and the Recipient as a way of contextualizing the story.
As part of a serial story, you once again give a spectacular turn by putting us in another perspective of the revenge of the character from task 1, congratulations.
The reflections, much more related to this task.
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Hola, recibida la tarea. Mañana será verificada, con el favor de Dios. Gracias por acompañarnos en este taller. Un abrazo.
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Thank you!
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¡Holaaa amigo!🤗
La venganza no nos conlleva a nada bueno. Como bien dicen por allí "Es la destrucción de nuestra alma" y, en tu hormiguita se vio perfectamente ese suceso porque murió por el odio que había en su corazón ya que, ese resentimiento le impidió que razonara y buscará las mejores soluciones.
Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚
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https://x.com/simaodev11/status/1856817511955927158
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You've got a free upvote from witness fuli.
Peace & Love!
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Hi, @dove11
Subject: send author review.
Concise text, thirty words maximum. For special edition of NG magazine.
Content: What do you want to say about yourself as an author?
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Dear Editor,
As a seasoned blogger, I am enjoying participating in your contest, and I hope to keep up and improve myself in the microblogging genre.
Thank you,
Dev
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Hi, @dove11
The flyer for sharing
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https://x.com/simaodev11/status/1857584833125560589
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Anda telah menciptakan cerita-cerita tentang dendam dengan sangat baik tuan @dove11, yang dapat dilihat pada Tugas 1 dan Tugas 3.
Di balik itu, bila kita berbicara kreativitas, saya pikir perlu untuk mencoba konsep cerita yang berbeda pada setiap cerita, sehingga tidak terkesan monoton, pada cerita 1 dan 3, saya merasakan kesamaan tentang "keinginan kuat untuk membunuh".
Padahal bisa saja pada cerita di tugas 3 itu Anda mengembangkan cerita tentang "Api Cinta kepada Ibu" yang mengungkapkan perasaan mendalam ketika kehilangan sosoknya.
Namun demikian, kita masih sama-sama belajar, tidak ada yang salah, hanya bagaimana kita ingin mengubah menjadi lebih baik.
#microwrite03
@joslud @solperez
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I appreciate your understanding about the topic but I did what I could with my limited knowledge. However, I will keep your suggestion I mind next time around. Thank you!
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Awesome
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Your story taught me many lessons about the immense strength we can have in the face of injustices. All Your story taught me many lessons; the immense strength we can have in the face of injustices. I've seen a theme of loss, vengeance and resilience. Though I'm not vengeful in nature I must be very careful how I treat others because it matters. actions have consequences, (good or bad) so we should be careful of how we treat people, no matter who they are we should treat everyone with dignity and respect.
Well, lastly, forgiveness and understanding can be a better and more powerful alternative to vengeance.
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I know most girls have tender hearts and stay away from violence but in this case, the protagonist is a female but she could not stop herself from taking revenge for her mom's death. Maybe the ex-soldier sitting inside me could think of nothing but an apt justice against injustice. Maybe my love for my mother made me think about the way I reacted in my story. Have a nice time!
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Do not use hashtag
Don't mention teachers.
Do not propose suggestions.
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