Total week: 7,12/10
Regards, @goodybest
A little late, because we have been waiting for the preparations for the new week. Review, you have an assignment for yourself in that post.
Let's go with the evaluation
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Task 2:
The story is humorous, admittedly. But the format is more that of a joke with dialogue, than of an old-fashioned telegram. He was asked to take it to the extreme of conciseness, perhaps even speaking primitively.
Example: Husband asks wife for panties.
Yes, it is difficult, especially if we are "speakers" 😊
Task 3:
A great sample of your poetic soul and your knowledge of love. Very close to poetic prose, than to action narrative, but beautiful and valid as a story. The title could be more shocking.
Hi @joslud, thank you so much for the review. Gosh! I really need to improve with my comments. It's bringing my scores down 😭
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