Hi, @ifatniza
Task 1 + task 2: 1,67/2 pts
You've done a great job, despite how busy you were with the master's birthday. I appreciate your conciseness and that you've spent time researching.
Task 1:
You've done a concise and summarized work, but the new Timun Mas is not as well presented as the one you did in the "first condensation". Much more empowered and confident, but I'm looking forward to seeing how you build it in tasks 3 and 4.
You can search, modernize the story, and turn the giant into another kind of enemy or threat to Timun.
Task 2:
As a first story it has the characteristics of an introduction, you establish the characters and how they relate, and as you say at the end, you still don't know how the story will end. And the style of fantasy fiction is recognizable.
Good work, but the recommendation is to turn the threat of the giant into another threat.
But you also have the freedom to work on other characters or stories, be creative.
