'Gone are the days when people use the physical currency to transact in their day to day operations' - erm no they are not.

'Nebeus (https://nebeus.com/) is one of the platforms that offer the crypto-currency transactions with all the liabilities as offered by banking services' - I'm not sure what you were trying to say here but this isn't it.

'For every startup company, the crowdfunding plays an important role...' no it doesn't

I could go on. This reads like a trainwreck in English, maybe it makes more sense in Russian but this may as well be saying 'scamscamscamscam.. ' right now. I understand you are an established company? If so invest in an English speaking translator to translate things into... well; English.

This gives no clear details of ICO at all, sure lots of people will probably see ICO and just jump on the bandwagon but that will only take you so far. If you are a decent, law abiding company in it for the long term go back to the drawing board and start again. If you are only in it for a quick ICO cash injection, well then I guess carry on 😒