My Original Song "Someday" // My Musical Journey Part 2

in music •  7 years ago  (edited)

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My Original Song "Someday" // My Musical Journey Part 2



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In my last music post I talked about how many years ago I was wandering aimlessly through life.
My significant partner at the time of writing this piece was also lost in much the same way, which makes sense since we tend to attract others into our lives who vibrate at the same frequency.


I wrote this song about him, but in retrospect I understand now that I was projecting as I was also writing it about myself.
I wasn’t as self-aware at that point in my life to understand that the negative aspects I was viewing in him were the same aspects that I didn’t like about myself.


Sometimes when you are in an unfulfilling relationship with the wrong person you can feel more lonely than actually being alone. I remember living with that feeling during the time that I was writing this.
I still get that "alone in a crowd" feeling every now and then, but I think it's more of an existential crisis moment that usually passes after a nice hot cup of coffee and a conversation with my cat.


Even after all these years I can remember writing this song.
I played an F in the left hand and played and E to a C in the right.
The Major 7 struck me for some reason that day and I heard the word “Someday” in my head when I played it.
As usual, the music flowed out of me first and the lyrics were written last as a puzzle piece to the melody that I had created.
But unlike some of my other lyrics, these were easy to write.

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Someday


Someday all the walls will break
Someday the truth can escape
Please don't see me as unkind
Hear what I'm feeling
You wander through this life
Like there's no meaning
You're throwing it all away
I'll never know why you think your dreams are not worth living
And I don't know if you'll ever change
But maybe you'll find a way
Someday when the world stops breathing
Someday when fire freezes
One day when I'm gone you'll see that nothing ever stays the same
And only a fool would wait for you to change
Cuz you wander through this life like there's no meaning
Someday all the walls will break
Someday only truth will remain
You should have known as you crumbled from the weight of living
You weren't alone
You didn't have to break from carrying all that weight
Someday when the world stops breathing
Someday when fire freezes
One day when I'm gone you'll see that nothing ever stays the same
And only a fool would wait for you to change
But I'll wait for Someday

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This one gave me the chills lovely! The words that go along with it, the melody... just gorgeous. Love your reflection as well.

Thank you so much Sunny Sun!
<3

So beautiful, @isaria. Just heard it on @kubbyelizabeth's Romance show, because @gmuxx shared it.

Ahhhh. Will be listening to this again today while I watch the snow gusting past my windows.

Thank you Jakob that's awesome yay!!
Have fun with all the snow!
<3

💘

Wow, you are very talented, I would love to hear you sing this song with just your voice too. It's so raw and has so many emotions, I bet just your voice would give it even more. Thanks for sharing your music with us!

Thank you so much Kubby! One day I shall perform it for open mic. <3

Thanks for playing it on your show Kubby!
<3

Beautiful song.

Thank you dearest Muxxy <3

Thanks for sharing it on Kubby's show Muxxy!

My pleasure, everyone loved it.

A beautiful song full of meanings , messages and advices that will help each one of us to improve his personality , thank you soooo much because you sharing with us your experience and your song

Thank you for your thoughtful comment!

Thank you too😃😃

I've been very stressed lately. This was a nice reprieve, very soothing. exactly what I needed right now. I favorited the song a followed you on soundcloud.

Thank you! I'm glad to hear that my song could be soothing in your time of stress. I know all about stress....
Hope you are feeling better today. :)

Thanks for the reply, it means a lot.
As for feeling better, I'm a bit on one of those not-so-enviable "spectrums". I oscillate between states of euphoric, energetic awesomeness and Dante's most inner circle of hell, lol. But, like they say, song soothes the soul of even the most troubled beast.

@isaria!!!!! I have chatted a little with you in Discord but today I set out to read your blog and i love this song. Its so pretty. I love slow mellow meloncholy music. Your voice is so good too. Reminds me a little of the Sundays. Oh and i would also like to compliment the photo at this time because sparkle hair is epic. <3

Thank you!!! I love the Sundays!
lol After messing around with that photo in photoshop I called it "Sparkle Madness".

Sweet song nice work my fellow steemit musician !!!!

Thank you Stick! <3

liking the pensively tranquil vibe isa :)

Thank you! Great description! :)

Steemit's best:)

Awww shucks thanks!

Nice! The kind of dissonant effect you have on your voice in the beginning part reminds me of Imogen Heap.

Cool thanks!

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

There's the song I was thinking of. Your song is really different, but something about it made me think of this.

Also, I'm about to put some of my own music on Steemit. I'm just curious, why did you choose to link to your Soundcloud rather than use DSound?

Cool, thanks for sharing! As far as me using Soundcloud, it's just habit. I haven't had a chance to make a Dsound account yet.

wow wow this is really nice, the lyrics are touchy
my own verse lol

maybe SOMEDAY
we gone be on a track together
and lets make the world feel better
with the voice,lyrics and Rhymes we utter
*u be the mom, me the poppa
of music some day
I'm just a dreamer.

#marshalllife

lol that's a cool verse!

☺ thanks

Wow amazing your all songs are superb .
Lyrics are amazing .you are just a song writer?

Yes, thank you! :)

My pleasure

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You have a wonderful talent and I am sure it will take you far.
I totally get the "alone in a crowd" feeling, but not sure that is a horrible thing. Probably just means you're thinking different than the crowd, And in my experience that usually means deeper than the crowd.
The people who understand that may be fewer, but can be great friends and allies.

Love your music!

the excellent posting of friends continue to work that we can with our hearts channel the inspiration for everyone

Nice song :)

I'm proud of you, keep on working.
Not my intention to beg, but if you please please upvote my post as well. Nothing wrong if we support each other. I know if you are a good person and help each other: )
my support let me add the spirit :)
I wait your presence in my post :) @isaria

https://steemit.com/aceh/@mahyul/jalan-jalan-ke-waduk-jelekat-lhokseumawe-8edd295ed6fc1

Really enjoyed your voice, the lyrics and your explanation. Thank you.

Thank you! :)

this @originalmusic..i like music..thanks for sharing story..best of luck.

I have a new tag for music lovers: Boombox, where I resteem up 2 five tunes a day!! Don't miss out.

I love this music I think I start to love her thank you for sharing my friend, how does that molodia sound

nice

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Thank you :)