Slide - My Original Song About Fear, Regret, Faith, and Redemption.

in music •  7 years ago  (edited)

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In my mind thoughts collide
Left without and lost in doubt
I remember feeling happy to just be alive
Once aligned
Soul divide
Ripped apart from light to dark and locked away for all these crimes
But you won't pray for me because I'm out of control
Pray for me
Because I'm so alone and I will atone
I can't deny my mistakes that are killing me or hide from the truth I can't speak
Slide, as I lose control
Into the void I can't deny
See you smile
Make you cry
You cower under my attack
I'm turning into something that I despise
Still alive
Dead inside
Left the path to my demise polluted with the filth of 1000 lies
Save me
Pray for my soul
Underneath, I was shallow and worn, tattered and torn
Pray for me
I was reckless, low, and out of control
Pray for me because I will atone

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I love this one, great opener to the album

Thank you Muxxy and also thank you so much for the rando!!!
Muxxy is the best :-)

My pleasure

You're a freak! I mean that in the best light. A freak of nature...an event that cannot go unnoticed. ✌️

That may be the best compliment I've ever received, thank you! :-)

lol...that may be the best response to a compliment I've ever received.
Hugs 'n kisses IRL would elevate it...back stage passes would top it all!

lol you'll be first on my list for back stage passes if I ever tour!

Victoria will love you! ~smiles~ I rarely go to the mainland but I will ferry across to Vancouver...if I have to. }:-)>

Where do you live?

Victoria BC, do you know it?
~smiles~ I am unfamiliar with The Land of 1,000 Cats
I guess I could just Google it...
and this is what I came up with

lol yes, this is my goal. I'm only 995 cats away!
Vicoria BC looks like a beautiful place to live!

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I would try to pray, But we remember what they'd say about use being gay.
So now they pay, because we stay a way. No, no we ant gonna Pray!

i love it so much! your lyrics are amazing... who does your produtions? fantastic sound

Thank you!!! I did the electronica-type production myself at home and tracked the rest at a studio.
It was an expensive experience lol

i am very impressed my friend this is fantastic. I dabble in all the genres and this is very clean, very quality. nailed the mood of your vocals with the production love the effects on your voice, its stunning work

Thank you so much! That means a lot coming from you!

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This is absolutely fabulous! I love it!

Thank you!!! :)

Wow loved this - did you write it? Well done

Thank you so much! Yes, I wrote it. :-)

Damn, that was one kick ass song!

lol thanks!!!

Hello, I produce another musical style, but I understand very well what is the facet of production and the work to obtain the results, it is very good that you look for your identity, originality in the creation of your own music, I leave you my upvote.

Thank you so much!

She's deeps, hide from the truth I can't speak. What inspired the song? Was it a life event?

Yes, it was inspired by personal experiences and pain....unfortunately lol

Your pain is my pain...Thanks for sharing a little piece of you.

Thank you Elizabeth :-)

This song is deep, made me think of my past relationship. Where he controlled me and turn me into someone I despise. Great song. You made me cry. You have a great voice. I love it. I just followed you Peaches. <3 Pinay Nomad

Thank you! I went through a similar situation, sorry it made you cry. :-(
I followed you as well. <3

it's hard when I think about the past. but it made me a stronger person I am today. Happy Sunday Peaches! <3

That's true, it does. Happy Sunday to you as well :)

sounds like it should be in a movie dope!!

Thank you!

I had to go and listen to the rest of the album on soundcloud. I'm really liking the whole thing! I had to go over to Bandcamp and buy both of the albums.

Oh wow thank you so much for buying them Amber!
I truly appreciate your support and I'm so happy that you like it! :-)

You're welcome!

"I can't deny my mistakes that are killing me"
Past mistakes is past. We have to move on and lofe must go on. We can't stuck in the one of our past mistakes. Let it be the best lessons to greet the brighter future. Hella nice poem 😊

Very true, thank you :-)

Your welcome :)

this is awesome!!!! i love the lyrics and the song, they work great together! I love how the lyrics flows, its awesome!

Thank you so much!!!

Ooh I love this your voice is so amazing and strong I'm jelly :)

lol thanks! Don't be jelly, it's all in the production. Go listen to my live voice and you'll hear what I mean. haha :)

This is awesome. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Thank you so much! :)

I love this.

You are so exceptionally talented.

Thank you so very much :-)

You nailed it <3 Really nice job!

Thank you!!! <3

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