Hello Steemit!
Some time ago my crypto mom @Isaria posted this purty song of hers as an open mic submission and tagged me saying if I could figure out what was going on. This was some composition done after an assignment and she was trying some techniques around it , after listening to it I thought it would be too long to actually explain it over chat.. so.. I am making this a post and doing the best in my ability to break it down as much as possible. ( a promise is a promise )
First , let's listen to the original song:
Stray - Original Song (@Isaria)
Now that you love the purty guitar playing and song .. I asked Simba if he could help me with the analysis... so... here we go!
Intro:
This song is in the regular 4/4 but revolves around a progression of chords that cycle every 3 measures , giving it a bit more of an interesting anchor point for melodic development , also .. this song is in D major but strongly resolves on the Em9 chord making this on a first listen a modal song .. It's built upon the E Dorian mode. We'll see what the melody dictates..
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 9.43.34 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmQB6NmvEoCSxwE2dSSgicrWYMCHKukBt9CWYQHzVR69yo/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%209.43.34%20AM.png)
Main melody:
So yes , the melody starts on a C# which would be the major sixth of the Em9 chord.. so.. yes.. definitely Dorian sound is implied heavily , also the melody seems to enter with suspensions and resolving after the first beat , thought on the last chord of the phrase there is a 9th left unresolved (The A note over the G chord) .. so.. it leaves expectation to enter the next phrase.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 10.17.13 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmdo1wQyBv6YgyrJF4juWJPEknFSgLBiqRxEDsjUGqCbdf/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2010.17.13%20AM.png)
Melody re exposition:
So , the main motif comes again but this time it moves a little further and targets the same suspension on the ''last'' chord , this time an F# note over the Em9 chord.. which is also a 9th.. this note is sustained until the D chord comes in , making it a third and resolving the phrase.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 10.33.10 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmTnpBRz7JJouFYNC7H3sapdPBWYctEpf1en7E9gzBDzkf/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2010.33.10%20AM.png)
''A'' section ending:
So , this part seems to be some sort of suspension exercise since there is a repeated attack on the 4th ( or eleventh) on most of the chords , also all of them are properly prepared and resolved , so definitely this was the intention around this particular section.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 10.57.02 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmbTkuZF7Gpk7UuJoWp1tVN6LjRjK3odGQMvhtTtsqhjNn/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2010.57.02%20AM.png)
''B'' Section Chord Progression:
So , we move to a more standard chord progression for the ''B'' part of the song , also, the cycling of chords happen every four bars , breaking it away from the previous section.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 11.07.57 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmRAZFUMniz5jQUSDjaSPDMRG1tgopBxFrF3JkkzhFzY25/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2011.07.57%20AM.png)
''B'' Section Melody:
This melody is pretty straight forward , the only thing to notice is the strong accentuation on the up beats , giving it a bit of a syncopated rhythm against the guitar , helping the theme go forward a little better.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 11.43.36 AM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmRDEc8VJU4fsA7E2seb6Pm2jjQgTbEggadCYyRfmUeZLd/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2011.43.36%20AM.png)
''A2'' Section melody:
We are back to the 3 bar chord cycle but keeping some syncopation from the ''B'' section going , my transcription here are note value approximations as the phrasing is a little more floaty but you get the general idea , this does have an interesting point to end , on the D chord but stressing the b7 in the melody , making this a strong dominant sound.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 12.05.51 PM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmZKj7nioxWjyXwPv4nYrnyxJ5v2BpCUY8NVa95hARFkbP/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2012.05.51%20PM.png)
Outro:
So , after a little melody ending phrase the song comes to this chord cycle , the chord voicings make it a little ambiguous , the Em7b13 could be interpreted as a C/E or an Am/E but since there is no melody it is open to intepretation , also de Dmaj6 could also be a Bm/D but same thing .. Ambiguity .. I like it .. hahahaha . It does depart from the Dorian sound the song was implying until now and goes to the realm of the natural minor , giving it a bit more darkness to wrap it up.
![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 12.30.06 PM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmbBdySLNroLXemjqVF5GPLZYameaLJvwKi3Z8TSfkHV5B/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%2012.30.06%20PM.png)
And that's it! This wraps up some of the key parts that I could find around the song but.. of course.. I transcribed it entirely.. if you would like to check the full part... TADA! :
Full transcription:
![pechi777.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmYt3rQnsXW3bVMTEWPyKeCPaZswLngeuhk8eAcri6YGFq/pechi777.png)
Just looked at the transcription...... A tale of a pop tart 😹 I love it!![Screen Shot 2018-10-29 at 8.01.52 PM.png](https://steemitimages.com/640x0/https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmUQ9GZ5xvNqMDUA3JKf92Jw51jqSYPpRn7SfQKEKLz433/Screen%20Shot%202018-10-29%20at%208.01.52%20PM.png)
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hahahahahah wasn't that the song about ? :P
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This is the best gift ever my son, thank youuuuuu!
You really did an amazing job with this and you deserve ALL the rewards so you keep them!
I had no idea the A section was built upon the E Dorian mode, I've learned so much from this post so thank you!❤️
If you truly enjoy doing this then you are welcome to analyze any of my music and keep all the rewards because you deserve it!
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hahahah mom! I'm glad you liked it :) .. It did have some little quirky tricks around it and it was fun spotting them :) !
When I like a songy song I usually like to break it apart and see what I can pick from it and yep , it's just some investigation fun.
If I have a little more timey time and you would like another transcription of a song you can ask me.. I'll lovingly do it . Just send Pop tarts ;)
Much Love
Pechi
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great job Pechi! What an awesome breakdown and look at this song ;9)
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Thank you very much @gibber ! major props go to Isa for writing it :) . Cheers!
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Can hear all the work you put into creation. May your passion bring you all you desire.
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I play and compose by ear so I see all those things and wonder but it's cool to see your analysis.... mine would render, no 7ths, wtf!
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