"သူမ"........("She".....)

in myanmar •  7 years ago  (edited)

ေက်ာင္​း​ေတြစဖြင္​့ခ်ိန္​တစ္​ခု...။
ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ စက္​ဘီး​ေလး standမွာထိုးၿပီး ​စာသင္​ခန္​းထဲဝင္​လာခဲ့တယ္​။ စစဝင္​ဝင္​ခ်င္​းမွာပဲ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​"သူမ"ကို​ေတြ႔လိုက္​ရတယ္​။ လွတယ္​သူမို႔လို႔ စိတ္​ဝင္​စားသြားတယ္​ပဲ​ေျပာရမလား ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​မသိ။ "သူမ"ကို ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​သတိထားမိသြားသည္​။ပံုစံက ျဖဴ​ေဖ်ာ့​ေဖ်ာ့ရယ္​။ ခဏအၾကာ အတန္​းထဲဆရာမ ဝင္​လာ​ေတာ့ ထႏ​ႈတ္​ဆက္​ၾကရသည္​။"မဂၤလာပါ ဆရာမ"။ ဆရာမ နာမည္​​ေတြ​ေခၚ​ေနခ်ိန္​မွာ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​နားစြင္​့​ေနမိသည္​က ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​့နာမည္​မဟုတ္​။တစ္​ျခားသူ၏ နာမည္​တစ္​ခု..။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ အရမ္​းသိခ်င္​​ေန​ေသာ နာမ တစ္​ခု။​ဆရာမ ကတစ္​​ေယာက္​ၿပီးတစ္​​ေယာက္​​ေခၚ​ေနၿပီ။ "သူမ"နာမည္​မပါ​ေသး။ "သူမ" "႐ွိပါတယ္​႐ွင္​့"လို႔ထထူးမယ္​့အခ်ိန္​ကို​ေစာင္​့​ေနမိသည္​။​ "ဟာ..လူ​ေတာင္​ကုန္​​ေတာ့မယ္​။သူလည္​း​ေက်ာင္​း​ေျပာင္​းလားမသိဘူး"လို႔ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​​ေတြး​ေနမိသည္​။ထိုစဥ္​ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​့နာမည္​​ေခၚသံၾကားလိုက္​ရသည္​။"လင္​းခန္​႔"။..."႐ွိပါတယ္​ခ်င္​ဗ်"။​ေနာက္​ႏွစ္​​ေယာက္​ဆက္​​ေခၚၿပီး ၿပီးသြားသည္​။"ဟာ......."သူမနာမည္​လည္​းမ​ေခၚဘူး။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​မ်ားမၾကားလိုက္​မိ​ေလသလား။မျဖစ္​ႏိုွင္​ပါ..။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ တစ္​ခ်ိန္​လံုးသူ႔ကိုအာရံုစိုက္​​ေနတာပဲ​ေလ။ဒါဆို ဒီအခန္​းထဲကမဟုတ္​တာလား.....။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​က​ေတာ့ အခန္​းထဲကသာ ျဖစ္​ပါ​ေစ ဆု​ေတာင္​းမိသည္​။ဆရာမ စာသင္​​ေတာ့ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ သူမကို ခဏတာ သတိ​ေမ့သြားသည္​။ ​ေက်ာင္​းစ တက္​ခါစဆို​ေတာ့ စာကသိပ္​မသင္​​ေသး။​​ေဘးမွ သူငယ္​ခ်င္​းအသစ္​မ်ားႏွင္​့ မိတ္​ဖြဲ႔ျဖစ္​သည္​။​ေယာက်ၤား​ေလး အခ်င္​းခ်င္​း သူငယ္​ခ်င္​းျဖစ္​ဖို႔ မိနစ္​ပိုင္​းသာ ၾကာသည္​။သည္​လိုပဲ ​ေတာင္​စဥ္​​ေရမရ ၊​ေတာင္​​ေျပာ​ေျမာက္​​ေျပာ ​ေျပာရင္​းခင္​သြားၾကတာပါပဲ။ ​"သူမ"ကို တစ္​ခ်က္​တစ္​ခ်က္​ လွမ္​းၾကည္​့​ေနမိသည္​။​ေဟာ..."​သူမ" ခံုမွ ထလိုက္​သည္​။ၿပီး​ေနာက္​ အတန္​းအျပင္​ဘက္​သို႔ထြက္​သြားသည္​ အထိကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​လိုက္​ၾကည္​့​ေနမိသည္​။"​ေဟ့​ေကာင္​ ..ဘာ​ေတြ​ေငး​ေနတာလဲ"။​ေဘးမွသူငယ္​ခ်င္​း၏ အ​ေမး​ေၾကာင္​့ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​လန္​႔သြားသည္​။"ဘာမွမ​ေငးပါဘူးဟ"။"ဆရာမကိုလည္​း ခြင္​့တိုင္​မသြားဘူး"လို႔ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​​ေတြး​ေနမိသည္​။ခဏ အၾကာ ​ေန႔လည္​​​ေက်ာင္​း​လႊတ္​​ေခါင္​း​ေလာင္​းသံၾကားလိုက္​ရသည္​။ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​သူငယ္​ခ်င္​း အသစ္​မ်ားႏွင္​့အတူ ကန္​တင္​းမွာ မုန္​႔သြားစားရင္​း..."သူမ"ကိုမ်ားျမင္​မိမလား..​မ်က္​လံုးကစား​ေနမိသည္​။မ​ေတြ႔​​...။မုန္​႔စားဆင္​းခ်ိန္​ တစ္​ခ်ိန္​လံုး အသြားအလာကိုထိုင္​ၾကည္​့​ေနသည္​။မ​ေတြ႔...။ဒီလိုနဲ႔ မုန္​႔စားဆင္​းခ်ိန္​ကုန္​သြားသည္​။"သူမ" ၏အရိပ္​အ​ေယာင္​မ်ွ မ​ေတြ႔...။အတန္​းထဲ ျပန္​ဝင္​​ေတာ့လည္​း "သူမ"ထိုင္​သည္​့​ေနရာ​ေလးကို လွမ္​းၾကည္​့မိသည္​။မ​ေတြ႔...။"ဟင္​"..​ေက်ာင္​းျပန္​တက္​တာ​ေတာင္​သူမ ​ေပၚမလာ​ေသး။"ဘယ္​​ေတြမ်ားသြား​ေနပါလိမ္​့"လို႔စိတ္​ထဲက​ေတြး​ေနမိသည္​။ဆရာမ အတန္​းထဲဝင္​လာၿပီး စာသင္​​ေနသည္​အထိ "သူမ"​ေပၚမလာ။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ စာသင္​​ေနသည္​ကိုစိတ္​မဝင္​စား။​"သူမ"ဘာ​ေၾကာင္​့အတန္​းထဲျပန္​​ေရာက္​မလာသလဲဆိုတာသာ ​ေတြး​ေနမိသည္​။"သူမ"ထိုင္​ခံု​ေနရာ​ေလးသို႔ခဏ ခဏၾကည္​့မိသည္​။​​ေက်ာင္​းသာဆင္​းသြားသည္​......."သူမ"​ေပၚမလာခဲ့ပါ။ထို​ေန႔ည​ေနက ဘယ္​ဘာသာရပ္​ကိုဆရာမသင္​လိုက္​မွန္​း ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​မသိပါ...။ထို​ေန႔တစ္​​ေန႔လံုး ​ေခါင္​းထဲမွာ သူမအ​ေၾကာင္​းမ်ားသာ.....။​ညဘက္​​ေရာက္​​ေတာ့ နည္​းနည္​း​ေမ့​ေမ့​ေပ်ာက္​​ေပ်ာက္​ျပန္​ျဖစ္​သြားသည္​။​ေနာက္​တစ္​​ေန႔မနက္​​ ​ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​​ေက်ာင္​းသို႔​ေစာ​ေစာ ​ေရာက္​လာခဲ့သည္​။​​ေက်ာင္​းထဲမွာ ​ေက်ာင္​းသားအခ်ိဳ႕သာ႐ွိ​ေသးသည္​။ အတန္​းထဲသို႔လွမ္​းၾကည္​့လိုက္​​ေသာအခါ တစ္​​ေယာက္​သာ႐ွိ​ေသးသည္​။ထိုတစ္​​ေယာက္​က....."သူမ"။မ​ေန႔ကထိုင္​သည္​့​ေနရာ​ေလးတြင္​ပင္​။"သူမ"ကို​ေတြ႔လိုက္​သည္​ႏွင္​့ရင္​ခုန္​သံ​ေတြျမန္​လာသည္​။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​သူမကို စိတ္​ဝင္​စားသည္​။သူမနာမည္​၊ သူမအ​ေၾကာင္​းသိခ်င္​​ေနမိသည္​။ သူမပံုစံက​ေလးက ပိုးဟပ္​ျဖဴ​ေလးႏွင္​့တူလွသည္​။ ဆံပင္​ ​ေဘဘီကုပ္​ က​ေလးႏွင္​့ ခ်စ္​စရာ​ေကာင္​းသည္​ဟုမွတ္​ခ်က္​ခ်လိုက္​မိသည္​။"သူမ" ကိုထိုင္​ၾကည္​့​ေနရင္​း တစ္​ျဖည္​းျဖည္​းႏွင္​့အတန္​းထဲ​ေက်ာင္​းသားမ်ား ​ေရာက္​လာၾကသည္​။ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ၾကည္​့​ေနသည္​့အခ်ိန္​အတြင္​း "သူမ" လႈပ္​ပင္​မလႈပ္​ဟု ထင္​မိသည္​။မၾကာမီ ​ေက်ာင္​း​တက္​​ေခါင္​း​ေလာင္​းသံၾကားလိုက္​ရသည္​။ဆရာမ အတန္​းထဲဝင္​လာ ၿပီး ​ေက်ာင္​း​ေခၚႀကိမ္​စစ္​သည္​။ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ "သူမ" ထမည္​့အခ်ိန္​ကို​ေစာင္​့ၾကည္​့သည္​။"မ​ေန႔က ငါသတိမထားမိလိုက္​လို႔​ေနမွာပါ"။ယ​ေန႔​ေတာ့​ပိုၿပီး ​ေသ​ေသခ်ာခ်ာ နား​ေထာင္​ျဖစ္​သည္​။"သူမ"နာမည္​ကို အရမ္​းသိခ်င္​မိသည္​ကိုး...။တစ္​​ေယာက္​ၿပီးတစ္​​ေယာက္​ နား​ေထာင္​ရင္​း....ရင္​းႏွီး​ေသာနာမည္​တစ္​ခုၾကားလိုက္​ရ​ေလသည္​။"လင္​းခန္​႔".......။ဆက္​ရန္​............

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        တန္းလန္းျကီးျပစ္ထားခဲ႔တယ္ေနာ္
        လုပ္ရက္လိုက္သာကြာ
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        စြဲးလမ္းဖူးခဲ႔တယ္ေကာင္းမေလးတစ္ေယာက္
        စာသင္ရင္းဆရာမမသိေအာင္ခိုးျကည့္ဖူးခဲ႔တယ္
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          ဪ အတိတ္​ကအ​ေၾကာင္​း​ေတြ ​ေတြးၿပီးျမင္​​ေယာင္​သည္​....

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            ဆက္​ဖတ္​မယ္​...စိတ္​၀င္​စားဖို႔​ေကာင္​းပါသည္​

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              ​ေက်းဇူးပါဗ်

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                ေက်ာင္းတက္ခ်ိန္ေတြကို သတိရမိျပီ

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                  သတိရသြားျပန္​ၿပီ ထင္​ပ 😆😆😆

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                    ေက်ာင္းတက္ခ်ိန္ဟာ ေပ်ာ္စရာအေကာင္းဆံုးပါဘဲ

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                      ​ေက်ာင္​းဝတ္​စံု​ေလး​ေတြ ​ေတြ႔ရင္​အရင္​အခ်ိန္​​ေတြ ျပန္​ျပန္​​ေရာက္​သြားတယ္​

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        fighting

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Thanks

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            I like it.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Thanks

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                သူမက ဘာေလးလား

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  မသိဘူးရယ္​

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                                    ဘယ္သူေခၚတာလဲ
                                    ဆရာမကလား

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      သိခ်င္​ ​ေစာင္​့​ေလ...ဟဲဟဲ

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                                        ေက်ာင္းတက္ရင္းနဲ႔လူတုိင္းလုိလုိဒီလုိေလးေတြ ၾကံဳဘူးတဲ့သူေတြမ်ားမယ္ထင္တယ္ ႀကိဳးစားထားပါဗ်ာ အားေပးပါတယ္

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Thanks

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              သူလား သူမလား (She)

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                ဘယ္​လိုက်န္​ခဲ့မွန္​းမသ္ိ

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  အဆက္​​ေမ်ွာ္​​ေနပါမည္​😃😃

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    မ​ေရးတတ္​​ေတာ့ဘူးရယ္​ 😁😁😁

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