ပိုးဖလန္ လို လူ

in myanmar •  7 years ago  (edited)

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သခင္ရယ္ ……
ရင္ဝယ္စြဲျငိ
ခ်စ္မိတဲ႔က်ြန္ ……
အမိုက္ႏြံကို
ပူမယ္မွန္းသိ
ပူမွန္းသိလ်က္
ေရွ႕သို ့တိုးသာ ……
မရုန္းသာျပီ ………။

ေႀသာ္ ………………

ခ်စ္စိတ္ေတြတက္
အိပ္ေရးပ်က္လို ့ …………
ညစဥ္ရွည္လ်ား
ေသာကမ်ားကို
ရင္ဝယ္ေထြးေပြ႕
ေမ့ဖို ့ကိုလည္း
မႀကိဳးစားမိ ……။

အို နာေသ ေဘး
ဒုကၡေတးကို …………
ဖြဖြညည္းဆို
ျဖစ္ပ်က္ကိုေမ ့
ေရြ႕ေရြ႕ျဖတ္သြား
အခ်ိန္မ်ားစြာ ……………။

မႀကာျမင့္မွီ
ေသမင္းဆီသို ့ …………
မလိုက္လိုလည္း
ရိႈက္ငိုစဲမွာ ……………
လိုက္ကို လိုက္ရ
မွာပါပဲ …………………။

ဒါကိုသိလ်ွက္
အပူေသာက
ခ်စ္ေဇာေတြႀကြ
ေမတၱာျပည့္လ်ွံ
လ်ံလ်ံေပါက္ကြဲ…………………
အခ်စ္မီးခဲ
တရဲရဲ ………………။

သခင္ရယ္ ………
ရင္ဝယ္စြဲျငိ
ခ်စ္မိတဲ႔က်ြန္
အမိုက္ႏြံကို
ပူမယ္မွန္းသိ
ပူမွန္းသိလ်ွက္
ေရွ႕သို ့တိုးသာ ………
မရုန္းသာျပီ ……… ။

                             အမွတ္တရ ေန႔ စြဲမ်ား
                                         18.2 2005

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      ·  7 years ago 

    ခံစားခ်က္က လန္းတယ္

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thank you!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        မိုက္​တယ္​​ေဟ့

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            ·  7 years ago 

          တကယ္လားဗ်ာ ေက်းဇူး အျပန္အလွန္ေပါ့

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Good bro

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                ·  7 years ago 

              ေက်းဇူး အားေပးတဲ႔အတြက္

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                This post has received a 0.10 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @myintaungnaing.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Good တယ္အကုိ

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    ေက်းဇူးပဲေနာ္ Thank you!

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Verry good bro
                      အဆင္​​ေျပလား

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                        စမ္းသပ္ေနတုန္းပဲ ခုေတာ့ အဆင္ေျပပါတယ္

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                          လူရယ္လုိ႔ ျဖစ္လာရင္ ခ်စ္ျခင္းႏွင့္ကင္းလြတ္ေသာ သူမရွိ.. ..

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            ဒါေပါ့ သမုဒယေႏွာင္ႀကိဳးမွသည္ ခ်စ္ျခင္းေမတၱာဆီသို ့

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              good post

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                                Thank you !

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                                    Thank you!

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