အေတြးကဗ်ာမ်ား ၃

in myanmar •  7 years ago  (edited)

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အိမ္မက္မ်ားႏွင့္ကခုန္ျခင္း

အဆိပ္​တက္​​ေနတဲ့ မ်က္​နာအခ်ိဳ႕ဟာ
တိတ္​တဆိတ္​ ​ေပါက္​ကြဲ ​ေနဆဲ မီး​ေတာင္​တခုလို အတၲ​ေတြကို ဝါးမ်ိဳ​ေနၾက ။

အတိတ္​က အရိပ္​​ေတြကိုျပာခ်
မိုးထိတိုက္​​ေပၚက သူ​ေဌးဆိုသူမ်ားဟာ
အမ်ားသူငါ အိပ္​စက္​ခ်ိန္​​ေတြကိုခိုးယူ​ေနၾက​ေလရဲ႕။

မႈန္၀ါး၀ါး ေျကးမုံျပင္တခ်ပ္နဲ႕အတူ
ငါ့ကံၾကမၼာ ပန္းပြင့္ေလးေတြကို
တစ္္စစီ ဖဲ့ေျခြခံရင္း
ငါ့ မာနကိုငါ ထုဆစ္ပုံေဖာ္ခဲ့။

မီးခိုးေခါင္းတိုင္ထဲ ခုန္ခ်ေနၾကတဲ့လူေတြကေတာ့
ငါ့ကိုၾကည့္ရင္း
ဟားတိုက္ ရယ္ေမာေနၾကေလရဲ့။

အိပ္မက္ေတြသာ လမ္းေလ်ာက္ႏိုင္ခဲ့ရင္
ငါတို႕အားလုံးအိမ္မက္ေတနဲ႕အတူ
ကခုန္ေနၾကမာပဲေလ ။ ။

စ်ာန္ ( မုံရြာ )

ကေလာင္အမည္ စ်ာန္( မုံရြာ)သည္
က်ေနာ္၏ ကဗ်ာေရးေသာ ကေလာင္အမည္ျဖစ္ပါသည္။

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အငဲ အကိုကြ
အငဲထက္ ျမင့္တယ္
ဝံပုေလြနဲ႔ မကဘူး ...
အိပ္မက္နဲ႔ကို ကပစ္တာ

၀ံေပြနဲ႕ေတာ့ မကရဲဘူး ေၾကာက္တယ္။

ပတ္ဝန္းက်င္က ေမွာင္မဲမဲဆိုေတာ့ အိပ္မက္ထဲလမ္းေလ်ာက္ရတာ ေခါင္းတိုင္ထဲဝင္သလိုေနမွာပါဘဲ

လု႕ သဘာဝေလးပါေအာင္ေရးထားတာပါ ကစိုးေရ ။

thanks, your post! have a nice day.

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ေကာင္းပါ့ ဆရာေရႊ။

လာလည္တာ ေက်းဇူး ညီေလး။

မံႈဝါးတာ ငယ္ကထဲက အုေရႊရ ခိခိ

ေအး ဟုတ္ပ ညာေလးေျပာမွသတိထားမိတယ္ ။

အိပ္မက္ေတြထဲ ကခုန္ဖို ့ေတာင္
ခႏၶာကိုယ္က အားနည္းေနေလရဲ႕
အိပ္စက္ျခင္းရဲ႕အခ်ိန္တခ်ိဳ႔ေပ်ာက္႐ွေနခဲ႔တယ္ေလ..

အိပ္ခ်င္မူးတူးနဲ႕ေရးခဲ့သည္ အစ္ကိုေရႊေရ 😁😁

အိမ္း လာလည္တာေက်းဇူးပါကြယ္။

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မီးခိုးေခါင္းတိုင္ထဲကေန ထြက္လာရင္ မလြယ္ဘူး

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