ၾကံဳရတ့ဲ တစ္ညတာ ( ၄ )

in myanmar •  6 years ago 

'' ေဒၚေအးသီ အသက္ ( ၇၈ )ႏွစ္''
'' ဦးေခြးနီ အသက္ ( ၄၆)ႏွစ္''
'' မသူဇာ အသက္ ( ၂၅)ႏွစ္''
'' ဟင္ ဒါဆို ငါ သခၤ်ိဳင္းထဲ ေရာက္ေနတာဘဲ ''

ေၾကာက္စိတ္သည္ ေၾကာရိုးတစ္ေလ်ွာက္ စိမ့္တက္လာသည္ဟု ထင္ရေလသည္။ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ တဲအေရွ႕သို႕ ခပ္သုတ္သုတ္ျပန္လာကာ ဆိုင္ကယ္ေပၚတက္ရင္း ေရာက္ရာေပါက္ရာသို႔ ေျပးရန္ ၾကံေလသည္။ သည္ေနရာႏွင့္ ေဝးလ်ွင္ေတာ္ျပီဟု စိတ္ပိုင္းျဖတ္ကာ ဆိုင္ကယ္အား စက္ႏိႈးေလသည္။ သို႔ေသာ္ ဆိုင္ကယ္စက္သည္ ႏႈိးမလာဘဲ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သာလ်ွင္ ကစ္ရလြန္းသျဖင့္ ေခ်ြးဒီးဒီးက်ေလသည္။

'' ေတာက္ ဒီ ဆိုင္ကယ္ေတာ့ကြာ အေရးထဲမွာ ျပႆ နာဘဲ
ႏုိးပါဟ ႏိုးပါဟ''

ၾကာလာေတာ့ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ လက္ပန္းက်ကာ ေခတၲမ်ွနားေလသည္။ ေျမပံုမ်ားသည္ ေၾကာက္စရာမလိုဟု စိတ္အားတင္းကာ အေမာေျဖေလသည္။ ထို အခ်ိန္တြင္ တဲအတြင္းမွ နာက်င္ခံစားေနရသည့္ ညီးညဴသံၾကီး ေပၚေလသည္။ ထို အသံသည္ သိပ္မက်ယ္ေသာ္လည္း တိတ္ဆိတ္ေနေသာ အခ်ိန္ျဖစ္သည္ကတစ္ေၾကာင္း ေၾကာက္စိတ္ေၾကာင့္ ပတ္ဝန္းက်င္အသံကို ေသခ်ာစြာ နားစိုက္ေထာင္သည္ကတစ္ေၾကာင္းေၾကာင့္ ေကာင္းစြာ ၾကားေနရေလသည္။ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ နားႏွစ္ဖက္ကို ပိတ္ကာ

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'' ငါ မၾကားဘူး ငါ မၾကားဖူး ငါ မၿကားဖူး''ဟု ေရရြတ္ေနေလသည္။ ထို႔ေနာက္တဲအတြင္းမွ ထိုအသံသည္ ဆိတ္ဆိတ္သြားျပန္ကာ လူရိပ္တစ္ခ်ိဳ႕ကို ျမင္ရျပန္ေလသည္။ အမ်ိဳးသမီး သ႑ာန္တစ္ခုသည္ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္ ထိုင္ေနေသာ တဲအေရွ႕ လမ္းေပၚသို႔ ေရႊ႕လ်ားလာကာ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင့္ အနားသို႕ ကပ္လာေလသည္။ ထိုအခ်ိန္သည္ တိမ္မဲမ်ားေၿကာင့္ လ၏ အလင္းေရာင္ အားနည္းသြားသည့္ အခ်ိန္ျဖစ္ေလသည္။ ထို႔ေနာက္ ေလအေဝွ႕တစ္ခ်က္တြင္ တိမ္မ်ားလြင့္သြားကာ ထို အမ်ိဳးသမီးသည္ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင့္ အနားသို႔ ေရာက္လာကာ ေလသံျဖင့္ ေမးေလသည္။

'' လယ္ၾကြက္ေၾကာ္ ယူအံုးမလား''

ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ ထိုအမ်ိဳးသမီးသ႑ာန္ကို အလင္းေရာင္ျဖင့္ အားယူကာ ေသခ်ာၾကည့္လိုက္ေလသည္။

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'' အားးးးးးးးးး''

ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္၏ ေၾကာက္လန္႔တၾကားေအာ္ဟစ္သံသည္ ညသန္းေခါင္ယံတြင္ အေတာ္ပင္က်ယ္ေလာင္လွေပမည္။ ထို႔ေနာက္ ဆိုင္ကယ္ပင္ မယူႏိုင္ေတာ့ဘဲ ေျခဦးတည့္ရာ စြတ္ေျပးေလေတာ့သည္။

'' မလာနဲ႕ ငါ့ဆီ မလာနဲ႕ အားးး ေၾကာက္တယ္ ေၾကာက္တယ္''

ေျပးလည္းေျပး ေအာ္လည္းေအာ္ရင္း ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ ေဆာက္တည္ရာ မရေအာင္ ေျခာက္ျခားေနေလသည္။ ဦးေခါင္းမပါသည့္ဟထို အမ်ိဳးသမီး၏ အနီးကပ္ေျပာလိုက္သည့္ ပုတ္အ့ံအ့ံ အနံ႔ၾကီးသည္ ေျပးလႊားေနသည့္တိုင္ ကပ္ပါလာဆဲျဖစ္ေလသည္။ ကိုေနာင္ေနာင္သည္ ေျပးရင္းကေန သစ္ငုတ္တစ္ခုႏွင့္တိုက္မိကာ လဲက်သြားေလသည္။

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      ·  6 years ago 

    @suhlaing, အီး စ တင္း ကို အ သံုး ျပု သည့္ အတြက္ ေက်း ဇူး တင္ ရိွ ပါ သည္။

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          ·  6 years ago 

        thanks

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            ·  6 years ago 

          အပင္ေပၚက ဘာႀကီးလဲ ေက်ာခ်မ္းစရာ

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              ·  6 years ago 

            သစ္ပင္ေပၚက ေမ်ာက္ၾကီးပါ

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                ·  6 years ago 

              ဖတ္​ရင္​းနဲ႔ ၾကက္​သီးထမိတယ္​.....ဦး​ေခါင္​းမပါ...​ေခါင္​းျပတ္​ႀကီးဆို​ေတာ့...😁
              ဆက္​လက္​ဖတ္​ဖို႔​ေမ်ာ္​​ေနပါ့မယ္​....

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                အားေပးတ့ဲအတြက္ ေက်းဇူးပါ ညီမေရ

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                  ေရးတတ္လြန္းတယ္ဗ်ာ Good job!

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                    ၾကိဳးစားေရးထားပါတယ္ ကိုေစာေရ ေက်းဇူးပါ

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                      ေတာ္တယ္ဗ်ာ စာေရးသြားတဲ႔ဟန္ခ်က္က စာဖတ္သူေတြကုိ စိတ္ဝင္စားေအာင္ အျပည့္အဝ စြဲေဆာင္ထားနုိင္ပါတယ္အစ္မ။

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        ေသခ်ာေလး ဖတ္ေပးလို႔ ေက်းဇူးအထူးပါ

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          ​ေစ်း​ေတာ့မ​ေမးလိုက္​ဘူး

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            ေအးဆို

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              လယ္ၾကြက္ေၾကာ္ ယူေတာ့ဘူးလို႔ ေနာ္

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                                ေၾကာက္တတ္ပါတယ္ဆို

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