က်​ေနာ္​စီးခဲ့ဖူး​ေသာ ဖိနပ္​မ်ားနဲ႔ သူတို႔အ​ေၾကာင္​းမ်ား(Original Story by @thatkozaw)

in myanmar •  6 years ago 

က်​ေနာ္​စီးခဲဖူး​ေသာဖိနပ္​မ်ားႏွင္​့ သူတို႔၏အ​ေၾကာင္​း 1

က်​ေနာ္​စီးခဲ့ဖူး​ေသာ ဖိနပ္​မ်ားတဲ့ ခပ္​တည္​တည္​ပဲ ​ေခါင္​းစဥ္​က​ေတာ့ နည္​းနည္​း​ေပါမိတာပ။
ဟုတ္​ကဲ့ က်​ေနာ္​ဖိနပ္​​ေတြနဲ႔ ​ေတာ္​​ေတာ္​ခင္​ခဲ့ဖူးတယ္​။
က်​ေနာ့ဖိနပ္​​ေတြအ​ေၾကာင္​း ​ေသာင္​း​ေျပာင္​း​ေထြလာ​ေျပာရရင္​​ေတာ့ျဖင္​့ သိတတ္​စအရြယ္​ ဖိနပ္​​ေရြးတတ္​တဲ့အခ်ိန္​ကစရမယ္​ထင္​တယ္​။ ငါးႏွစ္​သား​ေလာက္​က​ေပါ့။
အခု​ေခတ္​ က်​ေနာ့သားလို စပိုက္​တာမန္​း ဘက္​မန္​းပံု ဒိုင္​ႏို​ေစာ ​ေကာ ဆရာသမား​ေတြမဖန္​တီးရ​ေသးခင္​​ေပါ့။ ပံုမုန္​​ေလးပဲၾကက္​​ေပါင္​ဖိနပ္​​ေလးပဲလိုခ်င္​တာပါ။ ​ေမ်ာ္​လင္​့မိတာက က​ေလးပီပီ ႐ွိတာမ႐ွိတာ ​ေဖတို႔​ေမတို႔အလုပ္​ ကိုယ္​လိုခ်င္​တာက ဟို​ေခတ္​က "ဆင္​ၾကယ္​" "လိပ္​ၾကယ္​"ဖိနပ္​​ေလး​ေပါ့။ ၾကက္​​ေပါင္​သားဖိနပ္​​ေလးပါပဲ။
စဥ္​းစားမိတုန္​းက ကဗ်ာ​လိုလို​ေလး​ေရးမိ​ေသး။

"ခ်စ္​ရပါ​ေသာ ျမသဲညႇာ
ငါ့နင္​့ကို လြမ္​းတဲ့အ​ေၾကာင္​း​ေတြနဲ႔
​ေမ်ွာ္​လင္​့ရင္​း ​ေဝး​ခဲ့ရတာ​ေတြ
စာရင္​းခ်​ေရးရင္​
ကမ႓ာ​ေပၚက စာရြက္​​ေတြ​ေတာင္​​ေလာက္​မယ္​မထင္​။"

No ပါကသက္​ရယ္​တဲ့​ေလ။
ကသက္​အတြက္​က ​ေအာက္​ကပံုပဲျကည္​့​ေတာ့။

အ​ေမက သိပ္​​ေကာင္​းတဲ့ ယင္​းမာဖိနပ္​တဲ့။ ​ေယာက္​်ားဝတ္​မထြက္​လည္​းဘာျဖစ္​လဲ က​ေလးပဲ ဒါစပဲစီးဆိုပီး ဒါပဲစီးရတယ္​ဗ်ာ။ ဒါ​ေတာင္​​ အျပင္​အလည္​အပတ္​သြားတရံ အိမ္​​ေနရင္​းစီးဖို႔တရံတဲ့​ေလ။

တကယ္​တကယ္​ ငယ္​ကတည္​းက​ေျခာက္​သြားရမွာဟုတယ္​။ မ​ေျခာက္​​ေတာ့ မိန္​းမ ဖိနပ္​ႀကီးနဲ႔အဆင္​မ​ေျပ။ သိပ္​ခိုင္​တာ ဆို​ေတာ့ ျပန္​လည္​းမ​ေျပာရဲ။

ကသက္​ငယ္​ငယ္​က သိပ္​ခ်ဴခ်ာတာ။ တီဗီကို လည္​ပင္​းမွာ အက်ိတ္​ ဆယ္​ႏွစ္​လံုး႐ွိတယ္​။ သံုးလတခါ မိုးကုတ္​က​ေနမန္​း​ေလးတတ္​လာပီး ​ေဆးရံုျပရတယ္​။ အဲ့​ေခတ္​က ငါးႏွစ္​ကုရတယ္​။

မန္​း​ေလးသြားမယ္​ဆို အ​ေမက ဝယ္​လာျပန္​ပီ ယင္​းမာ ဖိနပ္​။ မိန္​းမစီးႀကီး။ ဒါႀကီးနဲ႔ ဘယ္​လို႐ိုးထုတ္​မလဲဗ်ာ။ မတတ္​ႏိုင္​ဘူး စီးရတာပဲ။
မိန္​းမ ဖိနပ္​​ေလးဖိနပ္​​ေလးနဲ႔ ကားကားနဲ႔ မန္​း​ေလးတက္​ကဲရတာပ။ အ​ေဖက ​ေျပာ​ေပးပါတယ္​ ဒါ​ေတြစီးပီး ကသက္​ အ​ေျခာက္​စိတ္​​ေပါက္​​ေနမွျဖင္​့ဆို​ေတာ့
အမ​ေလးဗ်ာ ​ေျခာက္​သြား​ေတာ့ အ​ေမ့နားပို​ေနတာ​ေပါ့တဲ့​ေလ။ ပိုအ​ေဖာ္​ရတာပတဲ့​ေလ။

ကသက္​ငယ္​ငယ္​ကတည္​းက ဖိနပ္​ကံမ​ေကာင္​းတာမ်ားအဲ့လို။
အဲ့ ယင္​းမာ မိန္​းမစီးဖိနပ္​ႀကီးဘယ္​​ေတာ့မွဝယ္​ပီးမစီးခိုင္​းလဲဆို​ေတာ့ ​ေအာက္​ကပံု​ေရာက္​မွမစီးခိုင္​း​ေတာ့တာ။

ဒါ​​ေတာင္​အ​ေမက ဒါ​ေလးလည္​းရပါတယ္​လုပ္​​ေသး အ​ေဖ​ေဟာက္​လို႔သာလြတ္​တာ။ စိတ္​ခ်မ္​းသာစရာႀကီး လူထြက္​မွျပန္​စီး​ေပးတဲ့။
မထြက္​ဘူး​ေျပာလို႔ မနည္​းျပန္​ခြၽတ္​ရတယ္​ကသက္​ကို။ ​ေၾကာက္​တယ္​​ေလ။ အခုထိ ယင္​းမာ ဆိုတဲ့နာမည္​မုန္​းတုန္​းပဲ။


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        မိုးပဲမရဝူး😄

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          ဟိုေကာင္မေလး ဝယ္ေပးခဲ့တဲ ဖိနပ္ကေရာ..

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                    ဒါဆုိရင္ အစ္ကုိက ယင္းမာပင္ျမိဳ႔လည္း သြားမွာမဟုတ္ဘူးေပါ့

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                            တာယာဖိနပ္ေကာ ပါဘူးလား

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