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in myanmar •  7 years ago  (edited)

သိမ္​းဆည္​းထား​ေသာ အလြမ္​းမ်ား

မနက္​လင္​းလို႔ အိပ္​ရာႏိုးတိုင္​း
သူ႔ မက္​​ေဆ့​ေလးမ်ား​ေရာက္​​ေနမလားလို႔
​ေယာင္​ယမ္​းၾကည္​့မိရင္​း
မလြမ္​းဘူး ..

မ်က္​ႏွာသစ္​လို႔သြားတိုက္​ခါနီး
ဆင္​တူသြားတိုက္​တံ​ေလးျမင္​တိုင္​း
မလြမ္​းဘူး …

​ေက်ာင္​းသြားဖို႔ ျပင္​ဆင္​ၿပီးတိုင္​း
အ​ေရာင္​တူ နာရီ​ေလးကို ပတ္​ရင္​း
မလြမ္​းဘူး …

လက္​ဘက္​ရည္​ဆိုင္​ထိုင္​တိုင္​း
​နင္​မႀကိဳက္​တဲ့ စီးကရက္​ဖြာ
မလြမ္​းဘူး …

​ေခၚဆိုမႈ​ေတြဆိတ္​သုန္​း​ေနတဲ့
ဟန္​းဖုန္​း​ေလးကို​ေဘးခ်
ဘယ္​အခ်ိန္​မ်ား နင္အျပဳံး​ေလးနဲ႔​ေပၚလာမလဲလို႔
မလြမ္​းဘူး …..

နင္​့​ေနႏိုင္​မႈ​ေတြ ဥပကၡာ​ေတြၾကား
​ဖိတ္​တဝက္​ စင္​တဝက္​
အိမ္​မက္​​ေတြနဲ႔
မလြမ္​းဘူး …

အိပ္​ရာဝင္​ခါနီးတိုင္​း ​ေမတၱာပို႔
သူမ က်န္​းမာ ရႊင္​လန္​းဖို႔ ဆု​ေတာင္​း
တကယ္​ မလြမ္​းဘူး ….

Wai Hin Oo
A HFS-15

myanmar steemit mypoem
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      ·  7 years ago 

    Beautiful poem. We can share our thoughts through poem. What ever in our mind. And it sounds nice for everyone. I also sometimes post some poem and I feel happy thank you for sharing your thoughts through your beautiful poem.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Do it

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        ·  7 years ago 

      good poem ေလးေနာ္

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Right

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            ·  7 years ago 

          ကဗ်ာေလးေတြအရမ္းေကာင္းလုိဆက္ေရးေစခ်င္တယ္

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              ·  7 years ago 

            မလြမ္းလို ့သာပဲ

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                ·  7 years ago 

              မလြမ္​းသာပါဘူးဂ်ာ...

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                  ·  7 years ago 

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  ကဗ်ာေလး ေကာင္းလုိက္တာ

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