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I find it difficult to read and follow your content. Your structuring and picture content has much room for improvement. You can improve by using a simple essay style that first introduces an argument with 3 supporting issues. Separate your paragraphs properly, for instance when changing a topic, and then use both an indent and blank line as a separator. Then build your 3 content paragraphs (or more) around your initial supporting arguments. Use dicriptive pictures, not foolish yoga pictures that make no sense. Finally, draw the line and conclude.
If you want to list items, then indent and use html code to help you display a list.
In your above text you have made statements without being very scientific. Since you are a PhD I do expect a high level of competency demonstrated.
I appreciate your content very much, I know you will provide better content as the time moves on. I wish you success on Steemit.
Thanks for your constructive criticism. I have much room for improvement on my structure, this is true. When writing for mobile phones content needs to have space otherwise with busy people the won't read when they see content rich paragraphs. I probably went a little overboard here and I do agree with your proposals. I hope you see me improve on this!
Science is a method of inquiry. You have a hypothesis and you design an experiment to test the hypothesis. I made statements about the nature of who we think we are vs who we truly are and gave a method for readers to inquire about the truth of this hypothesis. I believe that is science.
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Nooooo. Science is based on the results of experiments or relations based on exsisting proof. Don't worry, all will be well. I am not your average reader, so don't feel uncomfortable. I will pull off your socks before you know it! Don't worry, keep going. Good luck!
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Thank you, but your idea about science is incorrect. Science is not the results, science is a method of inquiry. Investigate this, if you don't believe me, but it is good that you've brought this up so that people will realize the truth about what science is and isn't :-). You should check out Rupert Sheldrake, he explains this issue well. Cheers!
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You are right, and you are wrong. I am always wrong, even when I am right. People live in denial, and they hate the truth. Science is both.
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