You have a minor typo in the following sentence:

Then At That Moment When Ever Fortnite Came Out BOOOM He Blasted Up Being On Of The First Player To Play The Game And Stream It On Twitch He Got A lot Of Views But No Subscribers Coming In So One Day He Said On His Stream "Guys I Am Really Loving This Game But Not Gaining Any Subscribers So If You Guys Are Not Enjoying I'll Stop I'll Just Stop Playing This Game " Then That Day BOOOM 120 Subscribers In The First Hour Then Just Keep Growing And Growing Then He Got More And More People To Play And Stream Fortnite On Twitch Then The Game Blew Up So Did He Then Suddenly Being Sponsored By Epic Games (BTW THE PEOPLE WHO MADE FORTNITE) Then Playing With Even Music producers Such As Drake,Marshmallow,lil Yachty,And More People Started To Donate So Much Even One Time he Got 500,000 In One Week But Now Making Around 500,000 Plus Every Month.

It should be one of the instead of on of the.