I am so happy by the response of my fellow steemians for the music I share. This is my second entry for openmic week 41.
It's a song that is in hindi and its about nature and life.
I hope you like it.
Lyrics by : @justjyoti
Please upvote / resteem if you do. Comments and feedback are appreciated
Lyrics : I have tried to translate them into English to the best of my ability but somehow they don't really make the same sense. Anyway have a look :
Lehron ne taraashe hain kai patthar
Hawaaon ne churaaye hain kai aanchal
Saagar mein samaai hain kai nadiyaan
Neele aasmaan mein hain milen baadal
( The waves have given shape to many a rock
The winds have swept away many an abode
Into the ocean many rivers have merged
In the blue sky the clouds are meeting)
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
( Now the rains are here and are soothing my soul)*2
Baarish se jo mitti mein khushbu hai
Seepi ne jo ro ro ke diye moti
Aankhon se chalakte hain jo aansu
Paani mein samaai hain wo boonde
(With the rain rises the fragrance of parched earth
The oysters cry and give us pearls
From your eyes fall the tears
And they merge into the water )
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
( Now the rains are here and are soothing my soul)*2
Honthon pe hain saawan ke gaan
Honthon pe merey hain saawan ke gaan
Gaaye jaa gaaye ja gaaye jaaa
( On my lips are songs of the rain
On my lips are songs of the rain
Keep singing on and on )
la la la la la la .....
Lehron ne taraashe hain kai patthar
Hawaaon ne churaaye hain kai aanchal
Saagar mein samaai hain kai nadiyaan
Neele aasmaan mein hain milen baadal
( The waves have given shape to many a rock
The winds have swept away many an abode
Into the ocean many rivers have merged
In the blue sky the clouds are meeting)
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
Ab saawan aaye bheega mora mann
( Now the rains are here and are soothing my soul)*2
Just wow!! Beautifully sung and written!!!! <3
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Thank you @milano .... Cheers !!!
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Thank you @milano
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The language of music is universal... Though the lyrics may not be understood by all - their message and intent is clear.... that was beautiful, thanks!
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Thank you @passion-ground for appreciating ... Peace and love!!!
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Very nice friend.
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Thank you for listening and appreciating... Cheers !!!
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Very Dreamy Sounding. The Water Behind you is Perfect! Very Nice.
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Thank you for your feedback and appreciation... Cheers !!!
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This music is like a trance. Very cool.
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Thank you @luzcypher for this amazing platform again... I am happy for your appreciation...
Peace and love.
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beautiful as usual. Please add the chords and if possible tab too... :)
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Thank you .... maybe later at some time... Cheers!!!
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Vote done sir.Please reply me post are vote.Vote to vote together?Please follow back!
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wow look at some people..first of all it's not a folk, it's all original song. As far as lyrics are concerned they are beautiful and not like today's bhangra pop songs or some stolen sufi kalaams. Vocals are always beautiful if there is a feel in them, if you don't agree just listen to Bob Dylan or Kurt Cobain or may be Janis Joplin or even Mick Jagger. One should be master in the field if one wants to criticize and one more thing, original artists are very sentimental about their work because they are creators and to criticize a creator you have to be a creator or in the same league...Peace to all and be positive..
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love the guitars , beautiful folk
vocals need lot of work
poetry is ok
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wow look at some people..first of all it's not a folk, it's all original song. As far as lyrics are concerned they are beautiful and not like today's bhangra pop songs or some stolen sufi kalaams. Vocals are always beautiful if there is a feel in them, if you don't agree just listen to Bob Dylan or Kurt Cobain or may be Janis Joplin or even Mick Jagger. One should be master in the field if one wants to criticize and one more thing, original artists are very sentimental about their work because they are creators and to criticize a creator you have to be a creator or in the same league...Peace to all and be positive..
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i am speaking coz i am a musician myself. and i have happened to write some very beautiful compositions. I understand all that u say. i feel it and live it everyday
when i said folk i was talking about the guitar chords being played. I think the overall recording is perhaps not that good, so its very difficult to really listen. would love to listen it live .
please do check my music and let me have all the critic https://steemit.com/sufirock/@sunnysandhu/bulanaji
www.soundcloud.com/prem-sena
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