Steemit open mic week 53... Safar (original song )

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello Steemians.

This is my entry in openmic week 53 hosted by @luzcypher and @pfunk. A big thanks to them and all my friends who have supported my music by upvoting and commenting.

The song is in hindi again and talks about life and the essence of living.

Lyrics and translation.

Mausam badal gaye ( The weather is changing )
Samay bhi ruka nahin. ( and time never stops for you )
Kahin gam kahin khushi ( Somewhere there is sorrow and somewhere joy )
Yahi to hai zindagi ( This is what life is all about )

Chala gaya ruka nahin wo pal ( The moment has gone and it will not wait for you )
Na mur ke dekh tu aage nikal ( Don't turn and look for the lost moment but move forward and ahead )
Muskura hai lamba safar ( Smile now it is a long journey )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )

Manzilein bekhabar ( Your goals are unaware of you )
Raahi hain ham raahon mein ( Because we are just travelers in time on the road of life )
Har lamha tu jee le ( Live every moment to your best ability )
Kar le jo hai chah mein. ( do what you want to do most in your heart )

Chala gaya ruka nahin wo pal ( The moment has gone and it will not wait for you )
Na mur ke dekh tu aage nikal ( Don't turn and look for the lost moment but move forward and ahead )
Muskura hai lamba safar ( Smile now it is a long journey )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )

Kyun dhoonde tu hai khuda ( Why are you trying to find god )
Hai tere mein hi basa ( God is a part of you and lives inside you )
Kitna jeena kisko pata ( How long we will live no one knows )
Kar le jo hai teri raza ( so do what you want to do that is most precious to your heart )

Man ke is bhanwar mein ( in the whirl pool of your mind )
Khud ko dhoond le ( find yourself and move out of its clutches )
Yahin gam yahin khusi ( because this is where there is sorrow and there is joy )
Yahi to hai zindagi ( and this is what we call life )

Chala gaya ruka nahin wo pal ( The moment has gone and it will not wait for you )
Na mur ke dekh tu aage nikal ( Don't turn and look for the lost moment but move forward and ahead )
Muskura hai lamba safar ( Smile now it is a long journey )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )

Kyun dhoonde tu hai khuda ( Why are you trying to find god )
Hai tere mein hi basa ( God is a part of you and lives inside you )
Kitna jeena kisko pata ( How long we will live no one knows )
Kar le jo hai teri raza ( so do what you want to do that is most precious to your heart )

Mausam badal gaye ( The weather is changing )
Samay bhi ruka nahin. ( and time never stops for you )
Kahin gam kahin khushi ( Somewhere there is sorrow and elsewhere joy )
Yahi to hai zindagi ( This is what life is all about )

Chala gaya ruka nahin wo pal ( The moment has gone and it will not wait for you )
Na mur ke dekh tu aage nikal ( Don't turn and look for the lost moment but move forward and ahead )
Muskura hai lamba safar ( Smile now it is a long journey )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )
Tujhe milega jahaan ( And you will get the world as yours by the end of it )

Thank you for visiting and listening. If you like the music please upvote, resteem, comment, all very appreciated.

Peace and love !!!

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This is beautiful @atulmittal. Liked the whistles and trills - you always have fun with your music and that shines through and lights me up. A gentle playful way to sing about some truly profound topics - you impress me every time Sir!

PS I really enjoyed listening to the hindi and reading the translation alongside it.

To all the singers out there please take the time to add your song lyrics to your post, it makes such a huge difference for me personally!

Thank you Carl for your kind words of support and encouragement. Music is supposed to be full of life and yes I really have fun playing it.

Peace and love !!!

Nice dude!, so cool you can write and sing on such language!, sounds great!

Thank you for stopping by to listen. Actually this is my language from birth. English is secondary. I am fluent in both.

Cheers !!!

Very Nice!!

Thank you !!!

Very cool how you wrote the lyrics out in both languages.

Very cool music.

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Thank you for your appreciation and support.

Cheers !!!

Hey @atulmittal, I want you to know I’m spotlighting this song of yours in a post called “The Top 11”. It’s a curated list of my favorite entries in this week’s open mic. High-five!

Thank you for the spotlight in your post. I am happy that you like it.

Cheers !!!

Really magic! Good luck! 😊

Keep spreading the love.

Thank you for your support.

Peace and love !!!

Nice uplifting song man. I really enjoyed that one!

Thanks mate. I am happy that language wasn't a barrier.

Cheers !!!

👏👏👏👏👏 Loved that to bits mate. Ditto @carlgnash's comment regarding the lyrics, it is what I keep saying! Nice one. 👍

Thank you for your kind words of support. I am happy that I could translate the song for you to understand.

Cheers !!!

Love it man, love it!

Thank you for listening and appreciating.

Peace !!!

Fantastic music. Love those chords. Great happy bouncy sequence on the verse. The lyrics are everything you could ask for - thanks for the translation. Top stuff! :-)

Thank you for stopping by to listen and for your words of appreciation. I tried to translate to the best of my ability but some feelings are not simple to translate.

Cheers !!!

Well, it comes across as sublime poetry that sees right to the heart of life. Don't know if that was what you intended! :-)

Totally intended. Thank you again.

we also say safar and zindagi ( zendegi ) same word :) , this was an amazing music and great Lyrics !

Thank you David for the appreciative words. Safar means travel and zindagi means life. I am happy that you enjoyed the song.

Peace brother !!!

I know their meaning as I said we have those words in Farsi , that was great brother !

Wow - I totally loved this composition! Nice to see you performing in another visual realm... Really great @atulmittal... such uplifting fun and spirit here, I can't get enough!

Thank you brother for your kind words and support. This time I just did it straight without any visual effects behind. I am happy that you liked it.

Peace !!!

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Love the fingerplay part! And the sunglasses indoor. Rockstar ;)
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