Steemit Open Mic Week 89 - A Fairytale - an original song by Bennett Italia

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

When I wrote this, I was thinking of how much sexual subtext there is in fairy tales, and what it would be like if that were explicit rather than implied... so this is basically an erotica version of sleeping beauty.

I wrote this song, among others, for a woman I was dating a few years ago. She loved it, but if I ever played it in public, she would leave the room. Which is understandable... as pop songs go, it's not exactly X rated, but it isn't PG either ;D


A Fairytale


So the boy slays the beast
Hacks his way through a wall of thorns
Scales a tower made of glass
Takes her in his arms and

This is like nothing he has ever tasted
Lips so cold and so sweet
Everything
Everything is melting
In the sudden rush of heat

Beasts can be fearsome, certainly
And he did lose a lot of blood at the wall of thorns
And the truth is that the tower almost broke his neck
But this...
This girl could break his heart

She's like nothing he has ever tasted
Lips so cold and so sweet
And everything
Everything is melting
In the sudden rush of heat

Now the silk of her hair
Now the blush upon her cheek
Now the hot blood drawn
By those sharp little teeth
And she's a dirty
Dirty princess
So hot
And so sweet
She's melting
Like ice cream
All over
The sheets
Oh she is such a naughty princess
Scratch that itch till it bleeds

Could it be
That happily
Ever after means
You have to expect to lose control
At least a little bit
Isn't this what you signed up for
When you kissed the kiss that

Broke the curse
That held the whole world frozen
Everybody waiting for a thaw
Now all the ice
All the ice is breaking
Just look at all these things
You thought you'd lost

Now the silk of her hair
Now the blush upon her cheek
Now the hot blood drawn
By those sharp little teeth
And she's a dirty
Dirty princess
So hot
And so sweet
She's melting
Like ice cream
All over
The sheets
Oh she is such a naughty princess
Scratch that itch till it bleeds

Could this be
What happily
Ever after means

©2018 Bennett Italia All Rights Reserved


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Thanks @soundlegion! So glad you liked it :)

I left the crying in at the beginning of the video because I thought it was funny... I was interrupted in the middle of a really good take just before this one. But I actually think this turned out even better ;)

brilliant song mate, great lyrics, love your voice too. good luck man :)

Thanks @turtleproject! High praise coming from a musician of your caliber :D

The music is really amazing, I like to hear original songs, they are usually from the soal. ☺

Thank you so much @clixmoney, glad you enjoyed it! Following, and looking forward to checking out your blog :)

Sounds great man! Missed you. Good to see you back.

Hey Luz! Thank you so much, it's good to be back. Already got one recorded for next week :D


This post was shared in the Curation Collective Discord community for curators, and upvoted and resteemed by the @c-squared community account after manual review.

Wow so very cool, thank you! I never heard of the Curation Collective until now, just checked you out on Discord, what a great initiative! I like that I can submit posts I come across for potential curation. Thanks for the awesome service, and the curie :)

muy buena tu cancion bro saludos

Hey! Gracias Danny :)

Catchy tune... and I do like your voice too! :)
Cheers!!

Thanks @ackhoo! All the best :)

Love it @bennettitalia, great lyrical spin and fingerpicking ;9)

Thank you @gibber! Great to see you my friend :D

I can only imagine how good the other take was... Ha-ha... This is gold, Bennett! Loved it, man!

Lolo thanks man, you rock! Yeah well I took the frustration and channelled it I guess :D