STEEMIT OPEN MIC WEEK 69, Original Song "Angeline"

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello Steemit,

This is for Steemit Open Mic Week 69

I wrote this song "Angeline" and it's one that I sing when I'm hanging out at home with my daughter, so she joined me for this performance. "Angeline" is about someone who came along and changed someone else, forever, in a good way.

Thanks to @luzcypher & @pfunk for hosting Open Mic, and for those who are taking the time to listen and watch these videos.

Lyrics:

There was a light in the darkness
It wouldn't let me pass by
It pulled me from the shadows
Then it lifted me high

I think you came to save me Angeline
There was a fire in your soul like I had never seen
Came to save me Angeline
To go into this world

And it's a long road to freedom
Full of death and decay
And love is hard to find
But you showed me the way

Came to save me Angeline
There was a fire in your soul like I had never seen
Came to save me Angeline
To go into this world

But sometimes the lights that are brightest
Oh they don't last too long
And you shone like the sun
But then one day you were gone

I think you came to save me Angeline
There was a fire in your soul like I had never seen
Came to save me Angeline
To go into this world

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so many elements that worked here just grabbed anyone watching im sure. you and your little girl and you both sing so damn good together, both great great voices, and fantastic playing you are carrying that rhythm so right on... tops guys wow

Thank you for the kind words. We really appreciate you taking the time to listen, and for the feedback!

Just excellent. I have always found it interesting how there is so much music about first loves, lost loves, torn relationships, etc. But those with children know that they are the most awe inspiring, emotion invoking, precious things on this earth. It seems like every song ever written should be about children. Love the song, love the dynamic with your daughter, love it all man. Upvoted and keep going.

Thank you for taking the time! We had so much fun. Yes, it is surprising how many songs are about love, lost love and torn relationships. :)

This is music at its best. Very impressive, Kudos

Thank you!

Upvoting here since I missed the post payout window.

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Thanks for hosting! :)

I'm falling in love with your music Daniel :) it's so genuine and relaxing. Very glad I followed this blog

Thanks @chimtivers96 I'm listening to "Bones" now!

heartwarming

Perhaps that'll be you soon...

i like this music...

I am glad you like it!

I've never been a singer until I had my daughter... I find looking at her or just sharing those special daddy daughter moments brings out emotions that would go perfect in a song. You guys are amazingly entertaining... IF my daughter wasn't sleeping, I would have her up now watching this.. haha... take care... just followed you...

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Thank you! All the best raising your little one. These moments are precious.

Very nice!

Thanks!

You're quite welcome. Super sweet. Do you know Hoots and Hellmouth? Your guitar playing reminds me of Sean Hoots a bit and I think you might like their stuff. Keep up the good work!

I've only heard the name, have never checked them out, but will now. Hey I like your open mic videos. Very creative and a good vibe!

Thanks man. I'm about to invest in a new mic and I hope to do some higher quality recordings of my own stuff.

That'll be great. I use a blue snowball mic for home recordings. It's a pretty cheap route and sounds good with garage band at least.

nice song!

Thank you!

Nice interpretation, friend

Thank you @zeroabsoluto

good song friend, keep working,😎🙌

Thank you for your encouragement!

thanks again, we fellow friends must support each other, because to succeed we need others, greeting friendship😄😊

She's a natural! So heartwarming :)

She minds me a bit of you when you sing!

thanks. have a nice day

Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for listening.

The best thing is not the song or voice or performance, is looking at them haveing so much fun togather!

I am surprised by your talent, congratulations to the 2 of them, a hug.

A hug to you as well!

Total Magic! Thanks for sharing : )

Thank you@johnny-nw

I feel shivers at the beginning of the song. I knew I had met an awesome song.

Thanks @dorth!

That was quite a pleasant listen, I enjoyed.

I am glad you enjoyed it!

Good family, and a good song 👍👍👍@danieldyemusic you are a good father 👌👌😊😊😊🎁🎁🎁

Boy I hope so. But she is a great kid, that's for sure.

Yes 👍👍👍 great kid 👌

Wow this song is great i like how your daughter got to sing with you thats so cute😊😊

Thanks @xylu. The most important thing is that we had fun together and made memories.

👍👍yeah thats right

I like this song..😎

I am happy to hear this!

chills. this is so beautiful :)

Thanks for the taking the time!

🎸"...this is the original song so Angeline and my daughter is here to sing it with me..."🎸

🎶 🎤 🎸

Perfect combo!! @danieldyemusic

big ups... to both of you ...

Thank you very much!

Amazing Tune!

Thanks!

hiiii!!! nice sound! i´m musician too ;D please give me a vote in my
OpenMic video https://steemit.com/openmic/@palmimusic/steemit-open-mic-week-69-vive-en-mi--coalo-zamorano-cover

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Wow! thats so fun, and energic song. I love it man! @danieldyemusic 👍

Thank you!

Your daughter is very beautiful dear.. She was just enjoying her self I bet she looks like her mother lool

Thanks. All the best to you!

wow,,,beautiful song,,,,i am really impressed

Thanks for your kind words!

That straightforward, heartfelt folk sound... This reminds me of the 60s folk revival. Beautifully written and sung. Following :)

Thank you so much @bennettalia! Those are kind words.

Its very beautiful..

Thanks!

What a cool father-daughter performance, Daniel! Great song - loved the way you kept the steady percussive element going throughout... Nice!

Thank you @passion-ground!

Good openmic piece, you have my vote, I also have a song here I leave the link for you to hear it https://steemit.com/openmic/@misc.jocs/steemit-open-mic-week-69-vive-en-mi-coalo-zamorano-cover

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

This made my heart so happy! You guys rocked it, and that girl of yours is awesome!

Thanks! I'll let her know. She was a little shy at first, but really got into it!

I hope we get to see her again!

This song has been in my head for days. I absolutely love it. Great lyrics!

Beautiful song, music and connection you show us in this video. I enjoyed that a lot! Thank you for sharing!

Thank you so much!

Your daughter is the star here :D

nice song and cute performance!

Good job danieldyemusic. It's a wonderful music ever. Keep singing bro. I always waiting for your song.

Thanks for your support!

you are welcome.

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