🎶 Steemit Open Mic Week 73 - Silhouette (Original)

danshawmusic (55) in openmic • 7 years ago

Hey all my fellow Steemians :)

Here is my submission for Open Mic Week 73 -

Hope you enjoy and please take the time to leave a comment as it never goes unnoticed :) Xxx

Lyrics:

Fade to darkness
& I don’t ever see your face
& I just want you to turn around
Baby tell me your name

You’re a perfect shadow
In this dark alley game
How do I make you turn around?
Baby tell me your name

All I can see is your silhouette
When you deeper we just disconnect
All I can see is your silhouette
I’m not the lover that you just forget

Don’t you, don’t you
Try to work out who I am
You’ll spend forever tryna work me out
I’m not your average type of ma’m

& don’t you, don’t you
Act like you don’t give a damn
I know I’m all you ever think about
I know this wasn’t what you planned

All I can see is your silhouette
When you deeper we just disconnect
All I can see is your silhouette
I’m not the lover that you just forget
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As always, thank you to @luzcypher @soundlegion @krystle @verbal-d @pfunk @meno and @passion-ground for taking the time to judge and encourage musicians across the world to present themselves and their music to a willing audience.

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dante31 (63) · 7 years ago

This is totally amazing

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geekgirl (72) · 7 years ago

lol just saw your comment. Amazing indeed!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @dante31 :)

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soundlegion (72) · 7 years ago

wooooo guys brilliant song! great singing... love you both so much and together you guys are golden

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much @soundlegion <3 Appreciate the love!

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verbal-d (71) · 7 years ago

Chilling and charming performance @danshawmusic
I mention you in my judge's top list for week 73.
Check this to read the full
review here

https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-73-original-blog

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @verbal-d :):) Means a lot!

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luzcypher (74) · 7 years ago

You did it again ladies. Fantastic song, performance, and harmonies.

Steemit Open Mic Week 73 Winners See Who Won Open Mic And Join Us This Week --- by @luzcypher

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much @luzcypher :):):):):)

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gibber (60) · 7 years ago

great song, totally complete acoustic performance, love the harmonies in particular ;9)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks so much @gibber :):) Appreciate it!

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pandamama (62) · 7 years ago

Excellent - well done girls !! @danshawmusic and @edenmichelle

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @pandamama :) x

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orianaarmand (55) · 7 years ago

Me encanta!

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rho-sama (36) · 7 years ago

This is just amazing! 💙.

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @rho-sama :)

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clivemartin (44) · 7 years ago

my favorite song I have hard so far today. Catchy nice chord structure and guitar riff. love the lead vocal tone and the harmony was bang on. I want to hear the drums coming in now and a chance to play a bit a sax over that lovely. Would love to see if you have a another fuller version brilliant :)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @clivemartin :)
Here is the full version of the song - https://soundcloud.com/danshaw/silhouette-dan-shaw-eden

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clivemartin (44) · 7 years ago

Thanks Eden, Dan just listened to it and carried on letting it roll over to the next. loving the instrumentals :)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @clivemartin :):)

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victoria-moses (31) · 7 years ago

This is beautiful and inspiring.. the lyrics are mind blowing. Wishing you all the best

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks so much for the kind words @victoria-moses :) x

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beeflomein (48) · 7 years ago

Great vocals and lyrics. Loved this one!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @beeflomein :):)

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fosterswisdom (48) · 7 years ago

Nice work.

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @fosterswisdom :)

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shaularosa (48) · 7 years ago

amazing song!!! and the lyrics too!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @shaularosa :):)

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passion-ground (63) · 7 years ago

You girls keep killin' it, man! Great song and performances - yes, you're right, that was awesome! :-)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @passion-ground :):):) We love submitting and getting so much positive feedback.. It's super encouraging! :):) Thanks for always looking out for our posts!

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nathankaye (63) · 7 years ago

Great song, gals!
Love it! Catchy and personal!
Where are you based?

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @nathankaye :)
We're based in London but currently in the US :)
Where are you based?

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @nathankaye :)
We're based in London and you?

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nathankaye (63) · 7 years ago

Awesome! I’m currently based in Melbourne.

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luzcypher (74) · 7 years ago

This song is so good it blows my mind. The lyrics and vocals are great!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @luzcypher :):) It was written by @edenmichelle so she is really the one who should be getting the credit.. But I'll pass it along to her :P
Thanks for taking the time to comment - seriously appreciate it :):):)

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edenmichelle (61) · 7 years ago

Thank you @luzcypher :) means a lot coming from you :D such fun performing it with @danshawmusic :)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

You're such a gem @edenmichelle

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jamesgetsit (64) · 7 years ago

Mannn, this is funky. I could see so many different styles for this song. I keep hearing like this real open sounding production with it, real airy, reverbed drums, some violin... mannnn... Soooo nice!!!

Great voice, great song writing, GREAT JOB!!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks so much @jamesgetsit :)
You can listen to the full version of the song here if you like - https://soundcloud.com/danshaw/silhouette-dan-shaw-eden

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jaybird (72) · 7 years ago

You Babes are great as always. Real well written tunes coupled with beautiful harmonies. Your voices fit together really really well.

I don't get to check out too many entries, however I always take a moment to tune in when I see something from either of you ;)

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much @jaybird :):) We post for open mic every week so keep the comments coming as we always encourage feedback! Thanks again for the kind words and the support x

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bitgeek (62) · 7 years ago

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @bitgeek :)

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augustias88 (46) · 7 years ago

Great perform...
I want to listen your next song.

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thank you @augustias88 :)

Our EP is available everywhere if you look for it :)

Dan Shaw & Eden Michelle - The Smoke

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augustias88 (46) · 7 years ago

Okey

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geekgirl (72) · 7 years ago

Absolutely beautiful performance. Lovely song, great music!

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks so much for the kind words @geekgirl :):)

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arcange (73) · 7 years ago

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danshawmusic (55) · 7 years ago

Thanks @arcange :)
Up voted you x

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