Steemit Open Mic Week 93 - Connecting The Dots - Original song by Darren Claxton

in openmic •  6 years ago  (edited)

Here's a new song for this weeks Open Mic contest sponsored by @luzcypher & @pfunk

Lyrics:

I came back today
then drifted away
can't hide in that place
cos it shows on my face

Some kindness remains
and it fits just in case
respected the race
and I feared your embrace

It was sent by a smile
that I'd never seen
never seen before
connecting the dots
to a picture placed
inside your heart

to count but divide
divide to rely
on words we never say
to the tears they wash away



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This is perfect Darren, really enjoyable, I heard it on radio :D awsome performance!! and a beautiful song!

Your story on sma radio about how you wrote this one, I really relate too. I do that a lot too. Great song, great lyrics!

wow,one of the best lyrics...awesome.

Thanks for the compliment and for listening to my new track!

Dear Artzonian, thanks for using the #ArtzOne hashtag. Your work is valuable to the @ArtzOne community. Quote of the week: Art, freedom and creativity will change society faster than politics. -Victor Pinchuk

What can I tell you? I love the theme, it fascinates me how you sing, the theme is beautiful, in short you are a tremendous artist and it would be really an honor to touch you, I hope and that happens soon, I know that it will be so

You're a very kind person! Your words and support for me and my music are truly appreciated!

:)

Hi Darren... great job man. A hug from Venezuela my friend.

Hey! Thanks for the support my friend!

And another great song... and poem
Great to listen to it live earlier on
Good luck, Darren

Dude - as if this week were not already chock full of incredible talent - here you come with "Connecting the Dots." I'm gonna get even with you one of these days... Ha-ha... ;-)

Hey man! 😂 Thought I'd have a few weeks rest!
Cheers for the love mate!

Love to hear you cranking out music like this. Keep up the inspiring work and congratulations @darrenclaxton!

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You won some Steem which you'll find in your wallet and also a 5-card packet of SteemMonster cards with your name on it you can find on SteemMonsters.com

Click here to see who won Open Mic week 93

Hey man! Thanks for the much needed STEEM! It's always a pleasure to share my art with you all here in Open Mic and beyond!
Have a great week brother!

@darrenclaxton, your song was selected to be part of the initial collection set of trading cards for the album of Steemit OpenMic.
Congratulations !!

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