OpenMic Songwriters Challenge Week 5: "Take a Picture" for Theme WIND SWEPT SHORE

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hey guys: this song is one I had partially written years ago based on a wonderful memory of mine with friends while at a conference in Portugal, and because I wanted to start participating in the songwriters challenge--not to win, as I'm so late to the game, but just to participate--I decided I could finish it up now and share it with you guys.

For some reason, it was FREEZING the week I was there in Portugal (not common), but we didn't want to miss going to the beach when we were near Lisbon, so we went. It was so cold and windy it took my breath away (I mean that literally--when the wind "steals" your breath), and we were trying to take a picture with sand everywhere and our hair swirling around and everybody happy but uncomfortable from the cold.

It was one of those beautiful, eternal, time-stopping moments, and I wanted to write a song about it - so when I got home, that's what I did. Just a simple, light-hearted little song :).

(Hilarious thumb nail by the way..whoops! haha)

Here you go! Lyrics below.

Take a Picture

Take a picture on the beach
Salt-soaked memories by a cold summer sea
Mighty, mighty, mighty cry the waves on the shore
All in violent sweetness while we try to keep warm

Faded photograph
Damp ocean fog, oh, how we'll remember that
Mighty, mighty, mighty blows the wind in our eyes
Swirling sand around us as we try to stop time

Faded, but engraved
Squint to see it but it will always stay
Mighty, mighty, mighty is the mind of man
Miracle, the way he holds the heights in hand

Take a picture for to keep
These oceans within our fragile reach
Mighty, mighty, mighty will the days rush, rush
But you're here in my heart after the waters
Mighty, mighty, mighty will the days rush, rush
But you're here in my heart after the waters
But you're here in my heart after the waters hush

xx,
Kay

If you enjoyed this, you can also listen to my original entry for this week's Open Mic or my Christmas playlist.

Your support means a lot to me. Thanks for following @kayclarity and resteeming my posts if you enjoy posts about beauty, art, culture, life, Steemit, and, of course, my original music and poems. xx

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I like your voice and style of songwriting very much!

Thank you, friend! :).

I love your voice. It's beautiful, like the song.

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Thanks - I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for running these great contests & giving us a good platform to share from!

And merry Christmas to you as well!

Such a beautiful song, Kay! Really nice!

Thank you, friend! Really glad you took the time to listen and that you enjoyed!

Love this song, your voice stirs up the emotions in me. It's almost as if I were there that day.;)

Thank you! That's a great compliment :)

Amazing video for women like you

:)

I really liked the development you gave the song and the bridge almost at the end. And the end. You have a great voice and you take advantage of that against us the mortal hahahaha

haha! I appreciate your kind words :). And you made me laugh!

Hahah Your welcome!! Btw, I'm in the Open Mic contest too and I made this. I think you may like it. Greetings and christmas hugs for you!! :)

Love the pop/country vibe you gave to this song ! loved the melody . Thanks for sharing :)

Thanks :). Glad you enjoyed1 xx, Kay