Steemit Open Mic semana 110 (canción original) - "Serenata pa' ti" por @ melor9. patrocinado por @pfunk y @luzcypher

in openmic •  6 years ago 

SERENATA PA´TI

Hola amigos de steemit, después de varias semanas vuelvo a estegran concurso con un tema propio :"Serenata Pa Ti". Es la primera canción con la que debuté como compositor, donde se muestra el ritmo y la forma musical tradicional de Venezuela "Orquídea" fusionado con salsa.

Su letra cuenta la historia de un cantante enamorado que, acompañado de su cuatro venezolano, intenta hacer que su amada se enamore de una serenata no tan poéticamente intensa, sino con mucho entusiasmo y simpatía.

SERENATA PA 'Ti

L & M: Carmelo Gómez

I

Con mi cuatro voy a dar esta serenata, con mucho sabor y amor, para ti muchacha (BIS)

Coro

Es que, por fin, hoy me decido decirte que estoy rendid0, enloquecidoo de amor por ti (BIS)

ven mi linda ven, que tu sonrisa ya quiero ver, besar tus labios es lo que haré. ven tu mi Eva aquí está tu Edén (BIS)

II

Si te miro cuando estás tan cerca de mí. La musa, la inspiración; vienen hacia mí (BIS)

Coro

Es que, por fin, hoy me decido decirte que estoy rendid0, enloquecidoo de amor por ti (BIS) ven mi linda ven, que tu sonrisa ya quiero ver, besar tus labios es lo que haré. ven tu mi Eva aquí está tu Edén (BIS)

agradecido con todo el jurado una vez más por escucharme en este espacio, me despido.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    ¡Pero qué calidad como suena esto! Nada que envidiar a talentos épicos de nuestro país, definitivamente una increíble pieza con una calidad vocal y de ejecución de cuatrista de élite, definitivamente me siento feliz por haber aceptado el reto de buscar publicaciones y haberme topado con esta gracias a @yrmaleza, magnífica labor.

    ¡Felicidades!

    ¡Este post ha sido seleccionado para ser votado en la iniciativa #Venelove, una iniciativa que durará dos semanas y constará de un pequeño apoyo desde mi cuenta personal con una hermosa delegación de 10.000 SP de parte de @tarekadam para llevar cariño y apoyo a talentos venezolanos. ¡Gracias por traernos tan buen contenido!

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    ¡Sigamos haciendo que la rueda gire!

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        ·  6 years ago 

      wow que alegría sus comentarios!y que me tomen en cuenta como buen contenido. desde Cumaná un abrazo grande

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          ·  6 years ago 

        que buen apoyo

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Felicidades. Seguimos el voto de @ilazrmusic para apoyar en su labor de curación, que busca recompensar el talento venezolano, gracias a una delegación que obtuvo de @tarekadam hasta el 18 de noviembre.

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              ·  6 years ago 

            graciassss!!! excelente!

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Qué ritmazo!! :-)

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                  ·  6 years ago (edited)

                mil gracias!que honor les haya gustado el rítmo

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                    ·  6 years ago 

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    gracias mil gracias de verdad!

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Quiero una serenata así 😎 jajaja. Buena esta amigo mío

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        jejeje con gusto se la llevaré!un un abrazote

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          Dear Artzonian, thanks for using the #ArtzOne hashtag. Your work is valuable to the @ArtzOne community. Quote of the week: Art, freedom and creativity will change society faster than politics. -Victor Pinchuk

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            es un honor recibir sus comentarios!gracias

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              Hermano que alegría volverlo a ver por acá. Buena música como siempre, éxitos cámara!!!

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                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                gracias por el apoyo hermano! bendiciones. les debo mucho a ti y a edmundo!un abrazo

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                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                  Felicitaciones!!! tremendo tema, me gusto mucho la melodía

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                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                    gracias amigo...sencilla melodía pero transmite alegría!jejeje un abrazo

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                                        ·  6 years ago 

                                      excelente, impecable, que bueno tenerte por acá, mucho cariño, que arte tan disfrutable.

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                                          ·  6 years ago 

                                        gracias hermano!bendiciones

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                                            ·  6 years ago 

                                          Eeerga, ¡Pero qué genial! Mis felicitaciones mi pana. Espero puedas dar permiso para hacer un cover algún día XD

                                          Un abrazo

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                                              ·  6 years ago 

                                            Por supuesto hermano!cuando componemos algo es oara el mundo

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                                                ·  6 years ago 

                                              ¡Genial! Anotado mi pana :) ¡Un abrazo!

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                                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                                Tremendo tema hermano....

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                                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                                  Jejeje gracias hermano beto un abrazo

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                                                        ·  6 years ago (edited)

                                                      Adoro esta imagen jejjejej saludos amigo @luzcypher

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