Steemit Open Mic Week 57 Original: Noria - Velvet

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello guys,
Here is my entry for this week's Open Mic(57).
I'm performing an acoustic version of Velvet, an original song, which originally released on my band's album
'Clear Backgrounds' on 2013.
It is about different kinds of love that we feel, about letting go and about letting your heart speak.
Thank you for listening.

Yours,
Nir

Velvet/
Stroke the light on your arms,
let it enter your heart
Stroke the light on your arms,
let it enter your heart

It is love, what you're feeling
it is love
It is love, what you're feeling
don't disturb it

From her hands to your mouth
let it spread in your mind
Let it grow as it wants:
loud or silent, loud or silent

It is love, what you're feeling
it is love
It is love, what you're feeling
don't disturb it

It is love, what you're feeling
it is love

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thank you

So cool, it would be nice to hear the album version! I've also posted my openmic video, I would be pleased to receive a feedback from you!

https://steemit.com/openmic/@myours/steemit-open-mic-week-57-shape-of-you-myours-s-cover

Thank you :) I like what you did with the song, it's really nice. I like the harmony that you chose very much. Would be better to balance the vocal and the piano next time, I felt that I missed many details in your voice as the piano was very loud.
best, Nir

Ah and for the album version of Velvet: https://noria.bandcamp.com/track/velvet