Steemit Open Mic Week 68 - Original: Nir Tsfaty - The Open Air

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello guys,

My entry for this week's openmic is an original song, called The Open Air.

Much love to you all, have a beautiful week.

yours,
Nir
.

The open air/

Years are going by
I can feel it on my skin
I'm not who I used to be,
no more

The sun hits the field
exactly where we meet
First time in the open air
the open air

I fall in your eyes, I fall

Years are going by
I can feel it on my skin
Everything around is clear,
is clear

I'm glad I'm here with you
I'm glad I'm here with you
in the open air

I fall in your eyes, I fall
.

The Open Air by Nir Tsfaty(©2016)

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Beautiful entry, Nir.

Thank you, dear @passion-ground!

Love your guitar figures here - I have a Takamine acoustic, too! I dig these evocative lyrics as well. I'm new to #openmic and I want to thank you for helping me to better understand the format and figure out what week it is :) Keep making your music, Nir! All blessings to you.

Thank you, dear @mightyjoenolan! welcome to openmic <3
best,
Nir

Thanks, Nir! I just uploaded my post. Think I did everything correctly :D

Cool :)

@nirtsfaty fantastic... goodluck

Thank you

Great sound friend. I enjoy it.

Thank you, dear friend @digitalopus!
Have a good week :)

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Thank you, dear @Luzcypher! <3

another great song my friend ! you sure have a talent for songwriting! so soft and engaging , loved the guitar motif throughout the whole tune . And some cool soft falsetto vocal lines ! loved it! cheers !

Thank you, @pechiche! <3

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