Steemit Open Mic week 75: Beast from the East (Original)

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

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This song has a really nice sounds! While I was listening it I thought my English is really better than before because I understood the most part of song and it's a great milestone for me ;)

That's good. Maybe my better microphone helps make it clearer. I'll add the lyrics to the post anyway.

That's a lot of words to sing! Good job!

I'm glad the temperature has risen and the beast has been chased away!

I'm sick of this shhhhhhhh...... too!

You should get a grime cover done of this! :P


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I'm happy for anyone to cover or remix it. To be honest I barely know what grime is :)

Man so cool to listen to you with a proper microphone and improved audio!...

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Cheers. I'm still experimenting. Had some issues getting the levels right. I was busy yesterday doing some lead guitar for a friend's song

That's the winter blues, dude!! Yeh, not much of a cold lover myself!
Good way to choke the living shite out of the winter blues is to write about the cold bugger! Good move! I dig it!

I think you are much clearer. The microphone must have really set you back, what kind is it?
Fun lyrics.

It's an MXL condenser. A friend got me a nice discount on it. It's not that fancy really, just looks the part

All the best @steevc. Also, thank you for sharing this:

This will be entered in the Steemit Open Mic contest run by @luzcypher and sponsored by @pfunk. I've entered about 40 of them and I'm trying to do something every week now.

Need to explore more about the contest rules because I don't sing English songs. Music is a universal language so I believe it won't be a hindrance.

Any language is allowed. Just have to say who you are and that it's for the contest so they know it's not a stolen video. The rules are all on the post

Alright. Thanks. Will search for that post and read its rules.

Yeah! nice songs!: Beast from the East

Love your song and the title.

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English is not my native language, so it's great, that you wrote the lyrics. I liked the melody and your performance! I wish you win the contest!)

Cheers. I don't expect to win against so many amazing musicians, but it's fun anyway

I think, people often underestimate themselves. Perhaps other members think the same way?))) The most important thing - faith in yourself.

it would be an angel from the east for we in africa....lols
nice rhythm and song

Wow... excellent music.... you played guitar very well...

Not that good really, but thanks

Nice one Steve!

Cheers

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

beyoutiful song and you sang it in a beautiful manner.
i loved the lyrics of the song and your voice is also pretty friend.
as you told me in your earlier post to improve my comments i am trying my best to improve it my friend.
but my english is not so good enough that i can compete with othes.
so i make my comments short,as much as i could.

You are multi talented. The song is great and the music is good too. But the most impressive we're the lyrics.
We always dream of a white Christmas,
but we hardly ever get snow
That cold white stuff is pretty rare around here
Which is good if you’ve got somewhere to go

The smallest hint of snow brings the roads to a halt
And half of the schools have to shut
We’d rather stay at home and let the kids play outside
Than take a long slow trip that does your nut.
Great great lyrics.

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like this

Wow!
Really good song.I wish i had the creativity to write good songs

Have you tried? I only started recently

@steevc...........really its so nice song,,,,,,,i most like the vocal tonic,,,,,,,that's so cute to listen.......i enjoy very much the song,,,,,carry on .....best of luck...

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

wow dear friend your music is so beautiful ans your song is so hart touch.. really i like your heart touch song......................

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“Have you heard of the illness hysteria siberiana? Try to imagine this: You're a farmer, living all alone on the Siberian tundra. Day after day you plow your fields. As far as the eye can see, nothing. To the north, the horizon, to the east, the horizon, to the south, to the west, more of the same. Every morning, when the sun rises in the east, you go out to work in your fields. When it's directly overhead, you take a break for lunch. When it sinks in the west, you go home to sleep. And then one day, something inside you dies. Day after day you watch the sun rise in the east, pass across the sky, then sink in the west, and something breaks inside you and dies. You toss your plow aside and, your head completely empty of thought, begin walking toward the west. Heading toward a land that lies west of the sun. Like someone, possessed, you walk on, day after day, not eating or drinking, until you collapse on the ground and die. That's hysteria siberiana.”
― Haruki Murakami, South of the Border, West of the Sun

To the point it was.

Wow;
This is great:

I have finally written a new song this year.