Steemit Open Mic Week 53 - Read Me (Original)

in openmic •  7 years ago 

First time in openmic


Here I am, finally, after watching so many weeks of openmic-s and posting nothing.
I can tell you I finally recorded something and I will give it a try.
I love this contest and want to be a part of it. So many great singers or instrumentalists or both at the same time.

So enjoy this little piece that's been written somehow automatically one day and made to be sang ( not so automatically :) )
The video keeps focusing but just imagine it's a heartbeat and it's immediately new experience. ;)

You say

Read me something
Read me sometimes
And then tell me
what you found out

Read to me
Read me through
and then tell me
you like it too

Read my moves
Read my lines
Read my truth
Read my lies
Read me nice

Then I let you
hold me close
Then I start to
touch your nose
your hands and your legs
and all the body parts you have
Just read
Just read me

Instr.

I say

I read you something
I read you sometimes
And then tell you
what I found out

Read to you
Read you through
and then tell you
I like it too

Read your moves
Read your lines
Read your truth
Read your lies
Read you nice

I’m reading every single word
Every letter once or twice
Chapters of you body
Titles of your mind
There’s so many pages
I will need some time
To uncover all the stories
Which makes you what you’re now

You say

Read me something
Read me sometimes
And then tell me
what you found out

Read to me
Read me through
and then tell me
you like it too

Read my moves
Read my lines
Read my truth
Read my lies
Read me nice

You can be the book
I’ll choose to read again
Have to break some rules
Just to be your friend
Tell me where and when
We will meet again
And I will read you
What you cannot read yourself

Instr.

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What an incredibly great song, beautifully performed! Thank you for sharing!!

Thank you my friend :)

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  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

If it makes you happy I will follow you ;) Thanks

Welcome to Steemit Open Mic and thanks for sharing your song.

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Thanks @luzcypher, you are doing a great job ;) Thank you for openmic

Great stuff bro!! welcome to the open mic, you are going to love it here!

Thanks @meno, nice to hear it from you :)

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Reading you loud and clear, brotha... NICE!

Thank you @passion-ground ;)

<3