Open mic week 43- Original Song- Sugar

in openmic •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hello Open Mic,

It's a bit late in this weeks open mic, and there are already some great entries, but it's never too late for some sweet music.
Here is a song I wrote called Sugar. It is a love song about no one in particular but about what love can be. Love can be a force through which the world can become a better place in individual peace and loving union. As long as we share in our anger, forgiveness and understanding. Truly seeing the value of everyones perspective and what emotions are for (anger can helps us right an injustice) after all these are the only things that seperate us, our different experiences in life. Many thanks to Curtis Mayfield on inspirational command on this song.

Enjoy!

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This is a fake claim. The photos were made by my friend Mark, @riskdebonair probably found me on facebook and stole Marks work and identity there. Here is the proof:

https://steemit.com/scam/@theflorescents/help-me-steem-riskdebonair-fake-steemit-stole-my-friend-marks-work-and-photography

So you are saying the guy singing "Sugar" is actually you,and they just put it out as theirs?

So yo are the guy with the pipe? If so you see him singing your song.
Correct?

Nice. Like your post

Thanks :)

Really great performance @theflorecents gave me chills while listening... this song really mellowed me out. Cant wait for next open mic

peace. love. and rock on 🤘

Your words have made me mellow for a whole day now. Thanks!

Great voice mate!

In your lyrics, "oh sugar, the good things take hard work, and I'm willing to work for you!"

That's what I'll say to Steemit. that's my declaration. :))

Thanks so much, you are sweet.

What a declaration! Haha I think it sums steemit up perfectly

Shout it from the mountain tops!

I will shout it out from the mountain tops but my voice is not as good as yours.
I will just let you shout it out and I will give a cough syrup when your tonsils began to hurt.
How's that? :))

Cool @pinaynomad that sounds fantastic! If you posted a video of it, would be super great :) say yes

haha! I'm sooooo far from the mountains man. I have to travel for 3-4 hours for that. lol

Nice mellow song. Enjoyed listening and thanks for playing for us.

Loved the line, Spread your love like butter.

Thanks, I am glad you like it, some nice hot melted love

It is great to see that there is a place where artists deserve to be appreciated and get what they deserve in a society that has apparently forgotten the value of art. It is unfortunate to know that there are miles of talents hidden by the fear of not being solvent to do what they like. I hope that Steemit can change many perspectives and start guiding us back to the path from which we move. Regards!

Absolutely right. That is why I think it takes brave people to truly dedicate themselves to art. I quit my day job just last week

you cool,i like

You too, many thanks

You too, many thanks

Fabulous song and performance.

Thanks

I've seen your music videos before. Your good man! It takes a lot of confidence and self-esteem to be a musician, or even to give a it try in today's world. Your guitar playing is pretty good and I really dig the lyrics of your song(s). Good for you for having the guts to perform in front of the whole world on the internet, not everybody is that confident. Keep up the great music videos on steemit buddy, your doing great!! I been following you for a while now, and I always upvote whatever you post. You deserve the upvotes!!

Thanks jamie. Really means a lot. Next time I'll show some more guitar skills. I think it takes some guts to put yourself out there, but it is worth it if you enjoy what you're doing. I really do love what I do and I don't care who sees it for better or worse. Thanks for the vote!

COOOL ~ mushrooms! Nice tune ~ got our open mic at cheba hut here in phoenix ~ 5 years running ~ woot! Bless! @mummedia

Cool followed you! When I am stateside I will drop in for a visit if that is cool with you

Sounds better than Ed Sheeran. Congrats!

Hahaha made my day!

Nice one, I love the way you handle those strings especially at the end.

Thanks @hay-bam I treat my strings right, so that they feel like silk ;)

Really nice performance and composition... Great voice, songwriting, and guitar playing!

What a compliment. Will defo check your profile sir. Cheers

Love your voice mate. Along with a great song you've cracked it there! 👏👏👏

Thanks mate :) Are you by any chance a steely dan fan?

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Very nice man! Curtis Mayfield wins - love it.

Always, I love Curtis, he is so deeply inspirational on the themes of love and togetherness.

Dude you have an amazing voice @theflorescents and I'm really into the lyrics. Following is a no-brainer. Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us. Can't wait to hear more from you!

Thanks so much. That is a world class comment xxx

I will be sure to send more music your way x

meep

nice song dude. there is a magic in your voice

Thanks bro

Nice..
Good stuff brother.
How's it going? How was that mushroom trip? ;)

It was quite fantastic, the hills were dancing. Thanks!

Haha.. Nice man.
Yeah.. even my first mushroom trip was in the hills and the clouds. Feels so nice and clean! :)

Ohhh sugar! That's so sweet, I like your style! 😊👍

Thanks :) you are sweet

beautiful song in this weak in open mic

Thanks much appreciated

Great job man, cool
Im agree with you

Glad you agree. About love I assume? Thanks

Yeahh, ur welcome :)

Cool song, thank you for sharing)) Everything what is about love is beautiful

So true, sometimes it hurts but definitely worth it. Thanks for your kind words

Follow me and I still like you

Thanks

Love your song!

Thanks so much

Great Song ! Thanks for sharing with us all :D

Thanks, my pleasure

I like your melody, keep playing music you have the talent.

I will! Thanks a lot

You have a great voice, and nice song there!

Thanks :)

Muy buena... Vas por buen camino.

Muchas gracias un abrazo x

Very nice!

Thanks man are you on the openmic this week?