Tonight's entry goes for the @openmic week #75!
I wrote this song today and had only a few hours to record it so I said to myself 'challenge accepted'. I get inspiration out of nowhere lately, it feels just great! I know I owe most of it to this contest. Words won't stop popping into my mind ♥
Anyways, this song talks about where I feel I am at this point in life. I'm about to move out to a new appartment, my first experience ever living on my own, so I'm pretty excited AND nervous! ♥ But I trust life it always turns out well, no matter what! So, I wrote this song thinking about all the things I have to do during the week, and how sometimes it gets overwhelming!
I want to thank @luzcypher, @krystle, @verbal-d, @passion-ground, @pfunk, @isaria and @meno for all the work they put into this contest every week! ♥ You guys have no idea of how this contest and your kind words make me feel!
PS. I laughed at myself when I saw the begging, andd the end! 😂 I messed some things on the guitar but, well... honestly, I like the energy and this is who I am, with my rights and wrongs, so I'm uploading anyways. I really and honestly hope you like it! ♥
I'm standing naked
In front of the street were I grew up
I don't recall a thing
Who is that girl?
Is she a part of me?
If I close my eyes
Maybe something I can feel
Is there something left to feel?
Inside my heart is aching
but I can't seem to reach out
That little voice inside of me
Turned into a woman now
I know my life may change from time to time
But I still feel
Like there's this little girl
Who's begging to believe
To believe
Begging to believe
Playtime always
Pops into my mind
Right in the middle of the day
Were I have to run
I step on grass and I feel alive
How is it that still forget?
The routine takes my time
Lara-lailala
Inside my heart is aching
but I can't seem to reach out
That little voice inside of me
Turned into a woman now
I know my life may change from time to time
But I still feel
The little girl's inside of me
Begging to believe
La-lala, larala
HEY!! im very new to steemit and just browsing across topics that i like and obviously music is one of them. came across openmic and saw your vid and thought id leave a comment. cool song, i wish you great succsess
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Cool! Steemit is a great opportunity to know new artists! You should definetly look up @openmic, some great songs 😍 Thanks for stepping by!
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Really beautiful song!!
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Hi @rhavi! Thanks! I absolutely adored your entry for this week 😍
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Such a mesmerising song and very playful melodies @vera.carla, you did a great job with this original, of course we liked it a lot
I have included you in my Judge's Top List Review For Week 75
Please view the entire article here
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-75-original-blog
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Thanks so much!!! I love this contest and how it challenges me every week ♥
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You're very welcome, I feel the same way :)
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wow, jaw dropping. What a beautiful song you have written and performed. You gained a new fan !
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This is a good song and I love that it's just fresh, especially because you nailed the steady fingerpicking which is sweetly underpinning the lyrics from your beautiful voice.
Great work!
🙏🏽👍🏾
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Thank you so much for your kind words!!! Really appreciate it 🙌💛
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No worries at all. I only found your entry because @passion-ground had put you in his list post.
Good luck!
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beautiful! Thank you for sharing your art, I like your voice, the technique and the color! I wish you success!
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Thank you so much 💛
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Excelente!
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Mil gracias!!! :)
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Beautiful song and voice!!!
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Thank you! ♥
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Lovely voice mate!
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Another beautiful song! Your voice serves your melodies really well too :)
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Thank you so much @andybets 🙃
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Love your song! Your voice carries it so well. Loved this performance.
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Thank you 💜 I'm in love with this contest! 😊
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Wow! That was awesome! You wrote and recorded this on the same day? That's pretty amazing! I like the way you finger picked the chords, the whole song was really good.
Good luck with your new place!
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Thanks!! 😄 Yeah, actually had this idea this morning and had to leave home and came back late at night! So I finished the lyrics and set the mic and said to myself Ok, lets see what comes out! It was like the seventh take 'cause I kept messing either the lyrics or the guitar picking hahhahh But it was my challenge! No way I could go to sleep without uploading my entry 😜
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Que lindo mi amiga! Vamooooo
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💜😊
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Cool voice.
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Thanks! :)
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Super performance. Especially it showcases your feelings.
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Thank you 🙃 I'm glad you liked it!!
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Estoy encantado con la letra de tu canción gracias
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Me alegro muchísimo de que te haya gustado :)
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que talento. de que parte es?
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Hola!! De Buenos Aires, Argentina!
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muy buen trabajo, me gustaria seguirte por tus redes sociales si las tienes. muchos saludos
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No sé cómo haces para escribir tantas canciones tan buenas!!! Te felicito, de verdad, me gusta mucho tu voz Carla! Saludos!! Espero te guste el de nosotros también https://steemit.com/openmic/@brendahcaroline/steemit-openmic-week-75-granola-tomates-fritos-la-nina-ingravida-cover <3
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Gracias!! 😄 Creo que es importante nunca perder el juego, la creatividad es una ilusión!!! Jajaja hay que jugar con todo lo que esté esperando ahí a ser dicho y el resto... Son adornos: así llego a las canciones!!! Un abrazo grande de 💜 y por más juego!!!
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Lovely! Don't know where you're drawing this awesome inspiration from - but by all means, do continue! Loved this Carla, and all the best in your new apartment!
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Thanks 💜 And I wouldn't know where to start... Lots of things going on!
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You are invited to stand naked in front of the street where I grew up ;)
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