Steemit Open Mic Week 75" original song (cover death metal-dosa)

in openmic •  7 years ago 

Hello Steemit Lovers and Openmic Lovers

Thanks for the theme this week, @luzcypher and @meno(and whoever else is involved that I'm missing).
"Good luck to open the mic and always glorious"
The song I sang below is a very hits song in the WORLD today, even many of you like this song.

today I want to fulfill the challenge of the next openmic.

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Lirik :
Hidup Kekal
Kepedihan
Dalam Ruang Tuk
Bertahan
Di Sudut Gelap Ini
Jiwa Terluka
Tak Sadar Diri Ini
Hidup Di Atas Dosa
Di Dalam Ruang Gelap
Ku Terbuang
Batin Ini Terluka
Di Dalam Ruang Dosa
Ku Terhempas
Di Atas Penyesalan
Batin Ini Terluka
Di Dalam Ruang Dosa
Ku Terhempas
Hadir Dalam
Ku Menangis Di Atas
Dosa"
Ku Bersedih
Hadir Dalam, Hina
Tak Sadar Diri Ini
Hidup Di Atas Dosa
Bersama Kabut Gelap
Jiwa Terluka
Tak Mampu Jiwa Ini
Untuk Terus Bertahan
Di Dalam Kabut Gelap
Jiwa Terluka

Thanks for listen !!
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Really well played!! Not sure I could attempt something so technical!


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