摔跤【第一屆 deanliu X Partiko 微小說 競賽：42字】

in partiko •  6 years ago  (edited)

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小明吃完香蕉随手一扔，
翌日出门，
“——啪”
摔个狗啃泥，
“他妈的！谁这缺德？”
低头一看，正是自己昨天扔的香蕉皮。

本来写了个肉包子故事，好不容易想到的梗，居然被听过类似笑话，哭o(╥﹏╥)o，没事，那我赶紧再写一个，肉包子的作废！

某天，小肉包子被妈妈派出远门办事，
回来的路上肉包子饿极了，
实在没忍住，
自己把自己吃了。
... ...

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      ·  6 years ago 

    这是无巧不成书？😄

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      ·  6 years ago 

    我该加一句，若有雷同纯属巧合

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        ·  6 years ago 

      一切都是必然，没有巧合~或者就是上辈子的事情？

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        ·  6 years ago (edited)

      最后的结尾，我觉得可以完善下！方向是往心理上刻画，

      骂了“他妈的！谁这缺德？”后，发现是自己的，但是碍于面子或者旁边有人，知道是自己扔的但是还在掩饰，又心虚者继续骂得更厉害，以掩饰之前骂了自己的这个错误

      这样效果可能会更好！不过控制在42字要下一番功夫！

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          ·  6 years ago 

        很难控制在42字内啊，好难

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            ·  6 years ago 

          好冷啊

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              ·  6 years ago 

            嘿嘿~冷就对了！

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                ·  6 years ago 

              这个笑话我小学时就聽过了。。。。。

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                不会吧Σ(っ °Д °;)っ

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  真的，我同学应该是在那些台湾综艺节目上面聽到的

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    那也太巧了。。。。好不容易才想到这个梗

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      啊，杯具了

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        不要紧，我再想一个故事，想到了再更新(;´༎ຶ㉨༎ຶ`)

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          原来是一个脑筋急转弯问题来的:

                          https://zhidao.baidu.com/question/680886010656878972.html

                          可是我不知道标准答案是什么

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            我已经又写了一个新故事~哈哈

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                                ·  6 years ago 

                              我天，居然还是脑经急转弯~不过我也不知道答案，提示的包子馅儿好像也不太对。

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                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                第二个更好玩啊😄

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                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                  第二个想的久些。。。可是有人说听过这个啊，哎

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                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                    没关系了 重在参与娱乐嘛😊

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                                        ·  6 years ago 

                                      嗯嗯(^o^)/

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                                          ·  6 years ago 

                                        感觉小学思想品德课本上有…

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                                            ·  6 years ago 

                                          自作孽不可活

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                                              ·  6 years ago 

                                            我发现我写的微小说 全都是和摔跤有关，第一个“碰瓷”也是摔跤，哈哈

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                                                ·  6 years ago 

                                              那，我以后就称呼你为“摔跤画后” XD

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                                                  ·  6 years ago 

                                                為什麼angelina6688的圖片都這麼可愛, 真的不容易抵抗... 路過

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                                                    ·  6 years ago 

                                                  因为我要化妆 少女

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                                                      ·  6 years ago 

                                                    哈哈哈，这个图在说明啥呢，要善待自己

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