mountainer (comedy)

in partiko •  6 years ago 

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Peter and his father live in the mountain. After the death of his mother, his father didn't go too far. From what his father remember there was no electricity back then. The two of them only plow field to plant vegetables and fruits. Farming is what makes them live. They never go in the city because they can buy what they wanted in the store. Not that near but it's not that very far like going to the city. If they want to sell their goods many buyers will came in the selling place.

One time Peter decided to go with his father in the selling place. They arrive in the pick up area or the selling place. Peter is amaze of what he is seeing. Many people are there and looks like having fun. Later on trucks are arriving one by one.

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When Peter saw the truck he hides at the back of his father.

"Father what is that? It's so big."

His father laugh at him because he was so afraid about it.

"Son don't be afraid, it's just a truck."

Peter stop hiding and stared the truck.

"Really? Then what is that?"

His father's face looks embarrassed because many people are around. His father pretend to smile and whisper near his ear.

"Don't be an ignorant son, many people can hear us. That truck is just like an animal. People in the city use that because unlike our horse it won't eat grass."

Peter is convinced and stop asking his father. After they sold the goods they goes home. The next day his father get bored because of silence. They decided to go in the store to buy radio.

"What is a radio father?"

"I don't know, all I know is there are sounds on it they say."

They keep on talking while going into the store as they ride the horse. They arrive in the store fast, thanks to the horse. As they arrive in the store they ask a sales boy to give them a radio to buy. They looks ignorant so the sales boy teach them how it works. After they bought it they are so happy. While on their journey, Peter can't wait to try the radio. Peter try to turn it on the radio with his father's permission. But there are no sounds yet, they can only hear the sound like blurry. There is no signal. They began to get worried but they're still want to try it. As they continued on riding the horse they reach at the top of the mountain. It slowly to make the radio some sounds. Suddenly there's a radio speak into it.

"LET GO OF ME!!!"

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Peter surprise and let go the radio, fortunately it thrown in the grass. Peter is scared and his father is curious. They step down in the horse and slowly taking a step towards the radio. When they are almost near the radio speak again.

"DON'T EVER THINK OF HOLDING ME!!

Peter is confused and ask his father.

"Why there man inside the radio father?"

His father get mad and get the bolo he brings.

"Damn it!! We just bought it and someone wants to take it."

His father slowly walking towards the radio.

"DON'T EVER TRY TO CROSS THAT LINE OR ELSE.....!!!

His father continue on walking. But the radio keep on talking.

"YOU REALLY DON'T BELIEVE ME, THIS IS FOR YOU..."

Then a sound of gun continue on firing. As Peter heard he shout.

"Father dock or you'll get hit."

They both hide and run towards the horse and run. They run fast and never gets back.

The radio is just having a drama on it...

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here is my new work sir @d00k13, thanks

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Right on buddy 💪

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It's really funny
Lol

Ahaha the simple life, we will never get to have these innocent types of confusions happen any more 😅

Decent writing job my friend, gotta start somewhere and this is a pretty decent length story!

My only suggestion would be about grammar and spelling, double and triple check 😅

Overall you can write!

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thank you sir, I will. What a wonderful comment. Truly appreciated it, thanks for giving time in reading it. Salute sir

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No problem buddy, takes time and practice to get really good like anything else in life just keep at it!

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