Galeotta fu quella poesia. Contest di San Valentino.

in passione •  7 years ago 


Galeotta fu quella poesia

sussurrata fioca nella ferrovia

Un bacio scoccato davanti alla croce

Il cuore, tremava, gridava a gran voce

Un sorriso sul volto tuo si nascose

ed io pensai " Mi ricordi le rose"

E le parole ci strinsero forte

fino alla vita forse la morte

E quello che solo pareva un diletto

una lussuria grave difetto

Divenne del cuore furor d' amore

e noi in un lampo fummo fragore. 


 Grazie a @fulviaperillo per l' occasione di cimentarmi in questo contest "Amoroso" dedicato a San Valentino. Non scrivo poesie da anni e oggi ci provo! Buttiamoci!  

Immagini prese da : 
https://pixabay.com/it/rosa-bokeh-cuore-messaggio-di-amore-3121239/
https://pixabay.com/it/rosa-bokeh-rosa-bianca-natura-3121243/


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      ·  7 years ago 

    Bellissima questa poesia! Brava :)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Grazie!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Oramai sono poche le persone che si dedicano ad esprimere i propri sentimenti con la scrittura.
      Complimenti per l'impegno e per la bella poesia, una tematica poi che fa sempre piacere leggere :)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Grazie ^^

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          bellissima poesia, complimenti. scrivere poesie è un' arte e tu sei bravissima.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Grazie =)

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                ·  7 years ago 

              beautiful poem <3

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Beautiful work !

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Bellissima, un'esplosione di emozioni! 😊

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Grazie per la partecipazione!

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