I was wrong about you!

in philippines •  7 years ago  (edited)

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The first time I met you was indescribable
I almost lost contact with reality and was miserable
The first time I locked my eyes on you
Was the moment I knew would change my point of view.

It was your unexplained gestures that tickled my heart
While my laughter became the bridge of the space once apart
The “you” and “I” became “we” and “us” in an instant.
But there was fear and curiosity I felt from a distant.

I was wrong about how I knew you
All the right kind of feeling turned blue
I was wrong about giving us a try
I was stupid for thinking the ocean could run dry.

Now as I look into your eyes seeing those mem’ries
I feel both anger and regret rushing and flooding that never perish
If I can only reset time and go back to the very beginning
I would not like to have sat beside you during that meeting!

I regret ever bit of it because I know I am so wrong about you!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I really love this post! Its portray an hidden story of Love gone cold. Smiles

    The beginning tells a story of love at first and its so sweet, intense, and pure;-

    The first time I meet you was indescribable
    I almost lost contact with reality and was miserable
    The first time I locked my eyes on you
    Was the moment I knew would change my point of view.
    It was your unexplained gestures that tickled my heart
    While my laughter became the bridge of the space once apart
    The “you” and “I” became “we” and “us” in an instant.
    But there was fear and curiosity I felt from a distant.

    And the closing depicts a Love gone cold and gone. Beautiful content Dearie. Keep steeming.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Beautiful poem @nikkabomb! well done :)

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          ·  7 years ago 

        I could somehow relate to this poem from a past love. LOL! But it as a beautiful poem :)

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