I feel heavy...
I feel some weight on my back
Pressing me to the ground
And I'm trying to oppose.
Something burdens me more
Than I can stand
I want to bounce back
But I can't.
So I'm getting used to that
Like I got used to your lash
That doesn't live one scar
One bruise, one mark.
I took this photo years ago when I was playing with my camera. I still cannot believe I had such dark hair ... The short poem I wrote right now. It reflects my mood perfectly. Enjoy and don't forget to upvote, please.
beautiful!
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:)
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Great photo and fitting poem
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:) thanks
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This poem really expresses the 'heavy' feeling you express so well in your poem! I really found this piece a nice read! Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
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I will definitely check your work out! Thanks, @lukakorba :)
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