Not Quite Yet

in photography •  7 years ago  (edited)

Not quite.... yet
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(¸.•´ (¸.• I can nearly see you
Deep inside my heart
Where dreams live that I haven’t dreamt
And when I do, I shall never forget.
Not quite yet
Not quite yet

Oh, say can you see? A spot of beauty to go with your Happy Valentines Day!

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Let the sun shine in on your life
So the joy may touch your soul

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Your word placement and structure really arel sublime. The poem is a work of art to read and look at.

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Thank you so much, Pryde. You have no idea how good that just made me feel.

Happy Valentines Day!

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Love that:):):)

❤️🌷❤️

I can say that you commented for me as well because I have no courage to comment on poetry?

A good way to comment on poetry is talk about what the poem meant for you. There really is nothing to be afraid of. Most poets just want to know their words had an impact:)

Thank you! I did literary analysis in high school and I read poetry, great Romans poets, I keep away from foreign poetry in the fear of not understanding certain expressions ... thanks for the advice, I will use it.

:)

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Maybe I am reading it wrong, but it seems to have a hint of sadness. Forget the bad and hold on to the good. That's how I get through.

Happy V-Day, Sunshine.

You think? It wasn't meant to be. It was actually more of a dream or sequence of dreams. Ones that haven't quite formed.

I'll let you know how they turn out.

Happy Valentines Day old man you. Tip!

Im reading my own sadness into it. My bad.

I hope yours turn out well. I have been having nightmares, and I cant shake it.

Hope your V Day was better than mine, Sunshine.

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I can not stand to see such beauty, I have to buy a camera! As always, the same admirer of your photos.
P.S. I asked Pryde to let me use her commentary on poetry. She's good!

Pryde is awesome! You are too, although I believe you feel inadequate with the language barrier. I can see that happening, but, that is why I post pictures so that everyone will have a little something to look at.

You would do great with a camera. Someday from the Steemit money? Thank you for admiring my flowers! They appreciate people gazing upon their beauty! (in real life)

Happy Valentines Day!

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tip! for a beautiful poem and photograph. Happy Valentine's Day!

Thank you so much, Diane! Appreciate the awesome tip!!

Happy Valentines Day!

Mwah!

💕💕Thanks, Denise! 😊

Happy valentines day Denise, dreams are what keep us going? Lovely flowers are very welcome at this time of year too. Just noticed the crocuses are popping up today.

Where would we be without sweet dreams, yes? I agree, Michael! The bleeding hearts are sprouting and we are on the brink (someday) of spring! Oh, yes! I have crocuses and the daffodils and tulip are starting to pop their heads!

I hope you had a wonderful Valentines Day!

An exquisitely beautiful row of bleeding hearts Denise. They really are quite unique when you look at them closely..........just like you, my friend. Your uniqueness shines here in steemit.

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Just look at you how you are growing!! You are already a 46 rep! I love it. You have surpassed my speed by miles. But, the good time is still the important thing and I am so very glad that you came over. You fit so nicely here, Trudee!

I love bleeding hearts. Short and sweet is their season, but, I love them nonetheless.

I hope you have a wonderful Thursday! It is well on its way! Tip!

Why, thank you kind lady. I so happen to have an excellent role model with the initials dsw. You wouldn't happen to know her would you? I'm so glad I came over too. Some of the most exotic flowers last for such a short period of time so it makes them al the more special. Thank you too for the tip but really, your support is more than sufficient for me and very much appreciated. xox

Awe that magical place where dreams live and the beauty of these flowers!
Happy Valentine’s Day my dear!
XoXo 🌺💕🌸

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You leave me the sweetest comments! Thank you so much, Maru! ❤️🌷❤️

Happy Valentines Day!

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thanks for the new blog. that is great and nice photography.

Thank you so much!

Very beautiful @dswigle! I saw some of those flowers just the other day. thanks for brightening our world with them. Happy Valentines Day!

They are called bleeding hearts. hence, the posting. :) They are always such a bright and cheerful addition to spring! Thank you so much and you and the hubby are so adorable!

Happy Valentines Day to you both! Tip!!

Thanks for your consistent cheer, support, and encouraging words @dswigle 💝

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What an amazing word you expressed....just wow... heart touching ..... and your photography is so beautiful..... best wishes....

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nice photo is always a great source of delight

Thank you so much!

Very nice

Thank you!

wow excellent photography...

Thank you!

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Have you ever pulled one of those blossoms apart? My mother used to let me do a couple every year so I could have "tea parties." There are two teacups, the pink "heart" halves. Then the inner stamen pulls apart to make two spoons and two butter knives, so you can butter your crumpets lol!

At the limit of sight, blindness, yet vision remains
A knowing, independent of senses
A shape, a fragrance, and energy - unthought, yet known
For now I wander in a foreign land
Seeking You, my Home

Deep sentiment, I like how it reads as if we are listening to your inner thoughts personal journey towards feeling :) I also love that image, it is really colourful, they look gentle but purposeful :)

Georgous words and I love those flowers!

In my reading of your poem, there seems to be an element of serendipity. I love the “where dreams live that I haven’t dreamt”. That is truly being open to possibilities. Very nice @dswigle.

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Great words and photo to move the heart and soul. I like the minimalist approach you took in this poem.

Oh! Beautiful bleeding hearts!! Happy Valentine's Day!

Hey, I'm Oatmeal Joey, and lovely.

Really nice poem, I love your expressive words and they follow context. Beautiful flower photo. I am new and love poetry too. mine is probably politicaly not the best because i am a song writer and my style is different.
But i do love constructive criticism.
Thank you for sharing a little of your self.

oww.. Absolutely beautiful .. they are like small hearts! very successful macro work .. congratulations :)

At first I read it as "I clearly see you..." but then I realized the stroke of a poet by putting the word "nearly" - it adds so much to the lines!

I am not as good as my wife @margaretwise in poetry but I love the photo ;) Greetings

You're an amazing artist my dear Denise. I feel cradled by your words, and the photo is a must! Thanks for sharing your soul with us!

I love the correlation between the poem and picture. btw what kind of flowers are these @dswigle? cheers

This is really beautiful great thoughts and a lovely flower click :)

nice flower photography and yes never quite and belated happy valentine day

The poem is a work of art to read and look at.DQmavEYxhkcSJ1NZknoGKdQtmihXwBj15iufN3cH4aW3Fhm.gif

These are the most delightful flowers, I love them so much..........beautiful photo and poem Denise. I hope you had a lovely Valentine's Day 🌸💖🌸

Never forget to dream.

Happy Valentine's Day.