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For those who prefer the convention of 5/7/5
red begonias set on fire
watered and shaded
Haiku and photo are copyright Pryde Foltz.
[Succulent] Haiku and Photography for #haikusaturday
red begonias set on fire
watered and shaded
red begonias set on fire
watered and shaded
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It does look like fire. Both versions are awesome. I kind of prefer your mentioning the name of the flower, but that's just my thing for flower names.
Lovely hot, @prydefoltz ♥
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Thank you, Marlyn:) I think I would have prefered the second one too if I could have figured a way to put the fire part in the last line:)
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the two versions are beautiful, just like the photography ...
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Thank you, Oscarina:)
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Both forms are brilliant. I think I like the first better, though. I love that picture!
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Thank you, Denise:) The photo did do something special:)
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@prydefoltz,
I suppose it would be gauche for me to admit that both the poem and the picture made me want to go get a hamburger. :-)
Nice poem.
Quill.
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You may just have been hungry. Thank you, quill:)
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Both, beautiful! Gems!
If I must choose, I prefer the mystery offered by the first version. That vibrant metaphor that fills confusing connections with various associations, all with meaning in the magic of mastered haiku. Splendid, Pryde!
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Thank you, Zeleira:)
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Begonias illuminated with beauty. Congratulations pryde.
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Thank you, Cordero:)
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If I understood Haiku, I might even like it more. ;-)
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Something tells me. You understand it just fine:) Thank you, HP:)
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great poetry to go with this cool shot
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Thanks, Jay:) Much appreciated:)
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@prydefoltz most welcome
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I think most of the post is best for the post. I am very happy to read your post.
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awesome.
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