Ukryta rana

in pl-poezja •  6 years ago  (edited)

Patrzę przez okno domu mego
I widzę ulicę a nad nią drzewo.
Jedna z gałęzi wisi nadłamana
I usycha choć by tak żyć chciała.
Boleje nad nią chłopak, który
Co ranek przechodzi tamtędy
Bo widzi że to drzewo cierpi.
On dobrze rozumie ból złamanej gałęzi
Bo i sam ma złamaną jedną z swoich części...

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Serce??

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        ·  6 years ago (edited)

      Świetnie odczytałeś mój zamysł! Dziękuję Karlosbadz :)

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Ładny wiersz:)

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Dziękuję :)

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Wspieramy ten artykuł naszymi głosami

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Właśnie dzisiaj czuję sie jak ta nadłamana gałąź.

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Czasami tak jest i to z różnych powodów. Czas leczy rany...Pozdrawiam :)

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  Fajny wiersz w którym opisujesz swoje odczucia

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                      ·  6 years ago (edited)

                    Dziekuję @mario42! Pozdrawiam :)

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