လြမ္းေနတုန္းပါ

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ေ၀းခဲ႔ၾကရျပီအခ်စ္ရယ္
တေျမျခားေနတဲ႔ ကိုတို႔ဘ၀ေတြ
တခါတေလ သတိရရင္
ဖုန္းဆက္ပါေလ
အျမဲမဟုတ္ပါဘူး
အားတယ္ဆိုရင္ေပါ႔

မအားဘူးဆိုလဲမတက္နုိင္ပါဘူး
အလုပ္ေတြမ်ားရင္ နားလည္ပါတယ္
တကယ္လို႔မ်ား အားတယ္ဆိုရင္ေပါ႔
ကိုယ္႔ကိုမ်ားသတိ ရေနမလားရယ္ပါ

ေ၀းေနတဲ႔အခါ လြမ္းေနမွာ
အနီးနားရွိတုန္း ဖက္ထားပါ
ဆံုေတြ႕ခ်ိန္က တိုေတာင္းလြန္း
အဲ႔ဒီလိုေတြအတြက္ ခ်စ္ေပးပါ
အခ်ိ္န္တိုင္းေပါ႔ေနာ္

အခုေတာ႔လဲေလ တကယ္ကိုဘဲ
လြမ္းလို႕ေနရျပီ ခ်စ္သူေလးရယ္
ဘယ္ဆီဘယ္၀ယ္ကိုမ်ား
ေရာက္ေနလဲ ဘယ္ရင္ခြင္မွာ
ေမွးစက္ေပ်ာ္ေနမလဲ
သတိရလို႔ လြမ္းေနတာ တကယ္ပါ
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            အားေပးေနတယ္

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                ဘာမွကို မေျပာတက္ေတာ႔ဘူး

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                    phat twar par tal

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                        တကယ္ၾကီးလား မမေရ

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                            nyo chin lar par pi

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                                Good

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                                    lwan par myar myar lay

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                                        စိတ္ထဲမေကာင္းပါဘူး

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                                            ေ၀းသြားတာ ၾကာေနျပီဟဲ႔

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                                                a lwan ta mar myar

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                                                    lar twar ta;

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                                                        လြမ္းေနပါတယ္

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